Backslides Poems | Examples


Big Boy

Bad "big boy" bare bard
Backbiter bacterial 
Babbler backslides
Categories: backslides, poets,
Form: Senryu

Premium MemberEmerald Isle

sitting upon the rocks
 oval bleached souls
with stone hearts
watching the waves rise 
thoughts drift away
 into another world
obscured 
by cryptic currents

 on the crest you sit
 on the tempest
long-haired temptress
enticing with
 your mermaid vice
 crashing waves carpet
 galloping onto sands
  the white steed crashes
as sea lime backslides
 
salt upon this earth 
 breathe wild and free
  I hear the seagulls cry
 echoing off cliffs where
  white skull prey lays
  one moment smiling
then washed away

 I found my Shangri-La 
amidst black tidal pools
 of misted mirrored pearl
 drops that fall then stop
 breathing in sea air
  leaving a little love
 upon the golden sands
a sailors burial ground
 in the emerald Isle


© Liam McDaid/Kim van Breda—March 2016
Categories: backslides, heart, lonely, love, ocean,
Form: Free verse


Shelling of Shoals

SHELLING OF SHOALS

oval souls
bleached out pearls
shelled stone hearts 
obscured cryptic
undercurrents
seaslime backslides
enticing 
Mermaids vice


whiteskull prey lays
shelved on shoals
seaweed eaten
greentail beaten
tidalpools black
sailor coldhole
burial ground



© Kim van Breda—9 December 2015
Categories: backslides, metaphor, ocean,
Form: Free verse

Arrival

I am inspired by people
who rise above the mundane quagmire
of their previous daily existence.
One day through diligence,
they become better off than the day before.

Just like an infant who steps out of a dirty diaper and 
continues to walk forward, he will ultimately look back.
He can hear, see, feel, smell or be smeared by the previous.
If he backslides he will lose what he has gained.

What he rose above, only to leave behind
becomes highly motivational in retrospect.
The ultimate essence of this new dignity,
 is to “NEVER FORGET HOW ONE ARRIVED!”


*Dedicatd to those who refuse to remember!
Categories: backslides, life, peopleday,
Form: Free verse
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