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Emerald Isle

sitting upon the rocks oval bleached souls with stone hearts watching the waves rise thoughts drift away into another world obscured by cryptic currents on the crest you sit on the tempest long-haired temptress enticing with your mermaid vice crashing waves carpet galloping onto sands the white steed crashes as sea lime backslides salt upon this earth breathe wild and free I hear the seagulls cry echoing off cliffs where white skull prey lays one moment smiling then washed away I found my Shangri-La amidst black tidal pools of misted mirrored pearl drops that fall then stop breathing in sea air leaving a little love upon the golden sands a sailors burial ground in the emerald Isle © Liam McDaid/Kim van Breda—March 2016

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Date: 4/15/2016 8:36:00 AM
You did a masterful job my friend!
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Date: 4/6/2016 3:07:00 PM
Beautiful Emerald Isle of romantic touch my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/5/2016 5:12:00 PM
Hi Liam!Wow!This is a very beautiful and kind of a little sad romantic love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam,in this collaboration with Kim.All so very beautifully written.Great title!smiling.Just awesome!I love it.Just dazzling!Very amazing profound heartfelt haunting piece!Just beautiful!Excellent imagery!I truly enjoyed it.Outstanding collaboration!A true golden gem!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really pray n' hope that you're okay in everything.Wishing you always the very best and to your very dear family,Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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