Ameliorating Poems | Examples


Premium MemberOur Shadows Serving

At the altar, see
our shadows serving
under the hand
of our Majesty’s Spirit.

In this succinct space,
how does God lean
into us, light up

our souls - with healing,
comfort, ameliorating whys.
His Spirit overshadows us.

Undeserving mankind,
less than an iota of sand,
means much more

than we can fathom
to the weightiness
of the savior’s cause.

God’s face had turned
from sin - to bridge the gap,
a worthy sacrifice;

completing the action,
resurrection after death.
That same Holy Spirit

in operation,
at the altar -
we should be duly in awe,

thankful beyond measure,
drawing closer
to His safe, loving, grace-full arms.
Categories: ameliorating, christian,
Form: Free verse

Premium MemberCity Limit Lights

In the city's limits at dark,
All the lights were in a glow
From corner to corner stood 
The brightness shimmered its shows.

It is something to view at night,
If you haven't been to the city before
Put it on your bucket list,
And go on vacation in New York,
Oh, don't resist!

The hustle and bustle that goes on,
Those street players performing
Whatever their art, craft, or music
They'll be doing some ameliorating,
Be sure they'll do it!

You'll hear the saxophones, 
And the brass horns to
Those series of strings bring them 
Blues players up from Blackwood Gorge.
The Mardi Gra is the city that lives.

Oh, those blues are playing,
Its echoes are from corner to corner
Those brass cymbals are swaying 
Like the slippery, shambling water 
On a tin roof when it's raining.
Categories: ameliorating, environment, family, imagery, inspiration,
Form: Prose Poetry


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