Our Shadows Serving

At the altar, see
our shadows serving
under the hand
of our Majesty’s Spirit.

In this succinct space,
how does God lean
into us, light up

our souls - with healing,
comfort, ameliorating whys.
His Spirit overshadows us.

Undeserving mankind,
less than an iota of sand,
means much more

than we can fathom
to the weightiness
of the savior’s cause.

God’s face had turned
from sin - to bridge the gap,
a worthy sacrifice;

completing the action,
resurrection after death.
That same Holy Spirit

in operation,
at the altar -
we should be duly in awe,

thankful beyond measure,
drawing closer
to His safe, loving, grace-full arms.
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Hind Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 8:47 PM
Completely beautiful. The metaphor of our shadows did this so well-
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 8:47 AM
Us poets notice things others might not :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:35 PM
stunning and captivating words, Kim. I do enjoy God's comfort and healing. Some days I crave it. I always feel safer when I'm grateful for Him, awestruck. Well said and powerful, hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Thank you, dear, sweet friend! May God bless you!
Velasco Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:11 AM
Really beautiful, Kim. I love how you show the Spirit working quietly in us, bringing comfort and healing. The image of shadows serving at the altar stuck with me. Thanks for sharing!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 10:03 AM
Thank you, Rowena!
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