Absentness Poems | Examples


take this

You have presented me with great challenges that brought great opportunity.
Covered head-to-toe in the things I cannot let go.
I revel in Your mercy and I seek Your grace.
I let my eyes wander for a season, but they always meet Yours again.
I watch my feet as they walk their own path.
You call my name and I freeze in my tracks,
suddenly recognizing what has become of me.
My feeling of Your absentness was skewed.
When You were right behind me, watching my every step.
So, I come to You now with a heavy heart and a strong plea.
Lord, take these burdens away from me.
Categories: absentness, christian, life, prayer,
Form: Free verse

Meaningless Happiness

Looking in the mirror 
I peer into my soul 
Who am I now? 
How did I get here? 
I fear I'm lost 
Tossed into this world like nothing 
Something worthless 
Like I'm worth less than bread 
And I dread tomorrow 
Sorrow overpowers my will 
To go on 
Is hope gone? 
How can I carry on 
Like this? 
I miss sanity 
Vanity created this life 
Now strife is abundant 
In my world 
Hurled me into darkness 
An abyss of absentness 
Meaningless happiness 
Confessing its inablilities 
As we have known 
And it has shown 
But must we keep prooving it? 
We're losing time 
With redundant proofs 
Of this truth 
Time is better spent productively 
If ppl could see that 
They would be that much happier. 

Jan 1, 2011
Tamara Brown
Categories: absentness, depression, happiness, introspection, life,
Form: Free verse


Crafting a Monumental Structure

Apprehensions in thoughts may form a labyrinth,
and like a cipher open up to become a plinth
but still the belief beholds to achieve what is imagined,
Though in a fog,the wanderer still feels attuned,
Let it be light or the approaching darkness,
but it isn't a mirage showing its absentness...
The people who waded along aren't lost,
As they too were finding a purpose, when their paths had just crossed
So continue the walk to paint the complete picture,
As like the dreams, the clay of life would build a monumental structure.
Categories: absentness, faith, travel, visionary
Form: Narrative
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