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Concrete Jesus Poems | Concrete Poems About Jesus

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The Names of Jesus

_____________ (_____GOD_____) (_____LORD_____) (_____ JESUS _____) (_______RABBI______) (_______TRUTH_______) (________SAVIOR________) (________ MESSIAH________) ________(_______ HOLY SPIRIT_______)_______ ___(_______________ KING OF KINGS_______________)___ (________________ EVERLASTING FATHER________________ ) (__________________ THE PRINCE OF PEACE___________________) (__________________GOOD SHEPHERD__________________) (_______________ LION OF JUDAH_______________) (________ LORD OF ALL________) (______MIGHTY ONE______) (_______HOLY ONE_______) (______ DELIVERER ______) (_______SHEPHERD_______) (______MEDIATOR______) (______ADVOCATE______) (______REDEEMER ______) (______CAPSTONE______) (_______PROPHET_______) (_______SAVIOR ________) (_______THE WAY_______) ___(______ALMIGHTY _______)__ __(_______THE BREAD OF LIFE_______) _ _(____________THE LAMB OF GOD__________)_ (_________THE LIGHT OF THE WORLD_________)

Copyright © Raul Moreno | Year Posted 2009


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Letters: OF FORGIVENESS

 f, O, r 
 g, I, v 
 e, N, s 

FIRE!
SENSES on fire
For Sins


Forgiven
O Risen One
Forgive sins 
Forgive foreigners
Fine roses for forgiven
Fires for forgiveness
No envies, rivenness
No "Ins" vs. "foreigners"

SEVEN SIGNS
SING SONGS
On FORGIVENESS

Sin is forgiven 
foreigner never goes for reign of sin
Forging "IRENE" even in oven
Frogs gone in ovens giving SEVENS ...
Over. Gone! Envision Gone forever

Envisioning Signs for Forgiveness
Fine Vines Ever
Finesse Forgiveness
For Risen One Is VINE
Never grins for sins
Forging Oneness ever!

Finesse forgiveness ever
Sin, rivenness ... over in vision for evenness
Everness is forever
Is ONENESS
For giving, ever giving
Fires gone! No fingers, no orgies, no ogres
For Risen One Forgives ever

Rose over Senses
Origin of Giving,
Forgiving, Serving,
Foreigners, Signers, Sinners ... 

RING for IRENE, Sing For Risen One
FIRE for Forgiven gone forever
Seven Servings Even For Frogs 
FROGGIES GOING FOR FORGIVENESS
(c) Deo, May 4, 2017.

NOTE: All words in this story - even THE RISEN ONE - are constructed of the same NINE letters (of the alphabet) that are used in the word: "Forgiveness."

Copyright © Anil Deo | Year Posted 2017

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UNDYING LOVE

Every river has its source but we tend to forget our very fountain
Aiming for the highest mountain
Causing a great disconnection
To our fountain he has given unlimited connection
To the throne of grace
But the rejection is written all over our face

He died for us before creation
Regardless of your colour race or nation
We deceive our selves that we continue in the part he left behind
But our LIFESTYLE shows that we never had his love in mind
Before we carry out an action he has already shown us his mercy
But our reaction towards his love makes everything messy

With our actions speech and thought we spit at his face
Insulting both him and his throne of grace
All he did was to bring salvation
For Gods most feared creation
Just to save us from eternal condemnation

We go to church and make noises
Deceiving ourselves that we are singing praises
It is not compulsory you give your life to him
When you do your life becomes a film
Making him the director and producer
All you need to be is the major character

Many of prefer to bow rather than burn unlike Shedrach Meshach and Abednego
Giving names to sin pretending they are not the same just because we don’t want to let go
When we lie we say its diplomacy
Forgetting that God was never in support of democracy
We take God for granted
Rejecting the word he planted
Just for nothing but uttermost vanity
Due to nothing but our act of cruelty

Copyright © olaoluwa samuel | Year Posted 2017


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By One Man

    		                         One man
       		                             Sin 
		                     Condemnation
	                         Through disobedience
                                       God's wrath
                                        Punishment			 
                                                                     All by Adam die	                              ---The cross---
       All in Jesus live
		                        Forgiveness 
		                         God's Love 
		                       Through faith 
		                       Reconciliation 
		                       Righteousness 
		                           One man 

Copyright © Juliet Ligon | Year Posted 2013

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Testimony

					   			

					Distressed, I attest,
					Like not blessed,
					A voice in my head,
					Said out of bed,
					So I was led to
					A quiet church,
					As owls sang out,
					Midnight gone tombs,
					And my tears appeared,
					Death beckoned long
					finger nails of distraction,
And so I gazed upon an open Abbey, with folk awake that caused a shake, God botherers with likely guitars, a melange of niceness where only grief was sat. So I drifted in, hiding behind tissues
of my own life lies, and sat prepared to run, quite prepared and scared, from that worse than death, the well meaning Christian. Then as I sank into the pews, staring up from rotten shoes, my woes, my blues, I saw floating in midair, a man, with dark blooded hair, and I knew then I was crazy within my distress, not blessed. But as that thought, which came to nought, crossed my elitist demeanour, I shared everything he felt, and at that moment, beyond compare, exquisite agony my problems became less than my being, now seeing Christ. Never one to take miraculous moments without scepticism, I stood disbelieving, a rescued Thomas who had seen, unseeing, still unbelieving.
					So I walked with much chagrin
					towards the font my eyes had
					seen, to find rational reasons,
					A reflection, some explanation,
					for why of all people this soul
					of mine, might be saved by 
					one whose face I had denied
					for so long, that no song could
					ever write my wrongs, and there
					in a Pentecostal moment, I 
					gained insight into the wind
					that came at night, where no 
					delight was held for me, 
					an agnostic changed now for
					all eternity. A man unworthy
					of that name, came to faith,
					kicking, screaming at how
					unfair, it was to find that God
					was really there, and worse,
					so much worse, he knew my
					name, and despite my attempts,
					cared enough to save my day.


	@Andrew Carnegie, Bessay Lighthouse, 28th December 2016. A true story.


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Copyright © Andrew Carnegie | Year Posted 2016

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Why you hate mi

                                              Why you hate mi??

Why you hate mi and a god mi put first?
Bad mind mi, a Jesus broke the curse!! (2*) 

God inna mi life, a him mi put first
Good over evil, a mi you can’t curse
His not my fate, mek your life get worst 
Mi seek him first, so how mi life must be worst

Why you hate mi and a god mi put first?
Bad mind mi, a Jesus broke the curse!! (2*) 

I love those how hate I, used I, and wish mi bad – a call down curse
Blessed love anyway, cause god inna mi life, a him mi put first
A praise him from mi heart, not from mi mind, and that’s the reason prosperity start 
shine

Why you hate mi and a god mi put first?
Bad mind mi, a Jesus broke the curse!! (2*) 

Love those who hate you, used you, and wish you bad, bad mind you, grudge you, 
don’t like how you “trad.”
Do unto others, you want them do unto you
Harm no one, and let no one harm you, have faith in the lord, not in man!

So, why you hate mi and a god mi put first?
Bad mind mi, a Jesus broke the curse!! (2*) 

Seek he first, and you life won’t be worst
Praise him from your heart, not from your mind
Have faith, work hard, and live out the hip
Abide by the rules, regulations, laws, and commandment sign
Put god first, materials behind
When you fall, get up same time
And don’t let the same thing catch you next time


Copyright © MERVIN SPENCE | Year Posted 2011

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Praises

                                         

                                              A 
                                             Life
                                            Full of 
                                         Unfortunate 
                                        Circumstances
                                    Made me look toward 
                               The sky, The sky for strength,
                            Peace, Understanding, and wisdom
                     During my hard times, I will praise you, Father,
                  I will praise you broke, wealthy, happy, healthy, sad,
               You're worthy to be praise Heavenly Father your love is,
                Like honey a feeling that I don't never want to let go
                    I will walk with you forever your undying love
                       You're the kings of kings, lords of lords
                         Lean on your word which never lies
                           You're the truth today,tomorrow,
                                And yesterday you're a 
                                       Merciful God 
                                          Worthy
                                           Glory
                                              !




Copyright © Patrice Trice Jackson | Year Posted 2016

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Amazing Love

No love more precious, no love more dear
Than the love Jesus showed when he was here
He gave joy to others; we’d call that cheering
He took care of others; we’d call the caring
He wouldn’t tell lies, or try to deceive
He would tell the truth, and hope we’d believe
Wherever He was someone was there
Yet he was not handsome, but kind and fair

Jesus Christ was sent from God above
To share with the world God’s amazing love
He came to let the whole earth know
To accept Him was assurance of a place to go
Where there will be no hurt or hate
And where joy, and happiness abound great
For the sins of the world to the cross he was led
So that means for us his blood was shed

So let us to Jesus go and pray
And ask that He wipe our sins away
So that one-day we may dwell above
And be surrounded by His amazing love.

Copyright © Victoria Bailey | Year Posted 2008

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itsy bitsy wafer

Justice of GOD meets JESUS dying for us on the c r u e l Cross of Calvary Compassion during His Passion, He offered Communion to us As often as you do this, do it in remembrance of me. BEHOLD J E S U S my KING washing the feet of His eleven at the L A S T SuppeR I t s y B i t s y B r e ad & Wine H O L D it A L L & YOU may end Y O U R L E N T & Fast W I T H Bread & W I N E J U S T enough For A MOUSE but God summed it all in H I S broken B O D Y, FLESH & spilled B L O O D. The Manna The CLAIM 'I AM THE BREAD OF HEAVEN; IF YOU DRINK OF ME Y O U will not THIRST AGAIN Hosanna H O L Y H O L Y H O L Y O GOD My Jesus W H A T Love Is T H I S

Copyright © Anil Deo | Year Posted 2017