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Zooming Along

Automatic automobiles Robotic wheels Just roll up and go Cross country roads No need to steer It is computer Techno rides Are almost here

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Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/16/2018 7:52:00 PM

It's amazing to wonder what they will come up with next! I love your creative form!

Sara Ella
Date: 4/16/2018 9:15:00 PM

Thank you Juliet :) Yes I think technology is fascinating!

Sara Ella

Date: 6/28/2017 8:15:00 AM

Thank you Kim :D It would make for an interesting ride!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/28/2017 7:35:00 AM

Should be an interesting ride! Robotic cop pull over...you looked a little dazed. Gives you a ticket to happiness. Just being silly :) a fun write, dear Sara!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2017 10:00:00 PM

oh those should eliminate a lot of accidents if they are all set to accident free mode!! I want one!!!

Sara Ella
Date: 6/26/2017 11:58:00 PM

Now that would be perfect! Me to!! :D

White Wolf

Date: 6/13/2017 4:56:00 AM

A lovely succinct piece, Sara! The images goes well too! Vroom vroom! Almost here indeed!

Sara Ella
Date: 6/14/2017 8:20:00 PM

:D It was inspired by an article and just like that - it practically made itself. Glad you like the pic too, I had a hard time choosing. :) Thank you Rick!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/12/2017 12:25:00 AM

Oh this made me smile, I adored this!!!

Sara Ella
Date: 6/12/2017 12:39:00 AM

:D Thank you Arthur!!!

Darren White

Date: 6/11/2017 9:25:00 AM

Haha, how could I have missed this! Sara and the cars! Wonderful poem and shape my friend <3

Sara Ella
Date: 6/11/2017 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Darren :) I am learning from reading my favorite poets <3

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/10/2017 6:00:00 AM

Excellent and interesting concept. Love it. Thanks for sharing it.

Sara Ella
Date: 6/10/2017 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Ravi :) It was inspired by an article. Who knows what the future brings!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/10/2017 5:53:00 AM

Hello Sara. How very true. They call this progress I say not. Give me a regular car that I can have control over and one that won't be breaking down. Nice formatting by the way. Have a wonderful weekend. Well done

Sara Ella
Date: 6/10/2017 10:03:00 AM

Thank you Lisa :) It was inspired by an article. I hope you have a great weekend too! <3