Sara Ella Poet Free verse

Zooming Along

Automatic automobiles
      Robotic wheels
           Just roll up and go
                Cross country roads
                No need to steer
           It is computer
      Techno rides
Are almost here

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Juliet Ligon April 16, 2018 at 7:52 PM It's amazing to wonder what they will come up with next! I love your creative form! Sara Ella April 16, 2018 at 9:15 PM Thank you Juliet :) Yes I think technology is fascinating!

Sara Ella June 28, 2017 at 8:15 AM Thank you Kim :D It would make for an interesting ride!

Kim Rodrigues June 28, 2017 at 7:35 AM Should be an interesting ride! Robotic cop pull over...you looked a little dazed. Gives you a ticket to happiness. Just being silly :) a fun write, dear Sara!

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2017 at 10:00 PM oh those should eliminate a lot of accidents if they are all set to accident free mode!! I want one!!! Sara Ella June 26, 2017 at 11:58 PM Now that would be perfect! Me to!! :D

White Wolf June 13, 2017 at 4:56 AM A lovely succinct piece, Sara! The images goes well too! Vroom vroom! Almost here indeed! Sara Ella June 14, 2017 at 8:20 PM :D It was inspired by an article and just like that - it practically made itself. Glad you like the pic too, I had a hard time choosing. :) Thank you Rick!

Arthur Vaso June 12, 2017 at 12:25 AM Oh this made me smile, I adored this!!! Sara Ella June 12, 2017 at 12:39 AM :D Thank you Arthur!!!

Darren White June 11, 2017 at 9:25 AM Haha, how could I have missed this! Sara and the cars! Wonderful poem and shape my friend <3 Sara Ella June 11, 2017 at 9:33 AM Thank you Darren :) I am learning from reading my favorite poets <3

Ravi Sathasivam June 10, 2017 at 6:00 AM Excellent and interesting concept. Love it. Thanks for sharing it. Sara Ella June 10, 2017 at 10:04 AM Thank you Ravi :) It was inspired by an article. Who knows what the future brings!

Lisa Ricci June 10, 2017 at 5:53 AM Hello Sara. How very true. They call this progress I say not. Give me a regular car that I can have control over and one that won't be breaking down. Nice formatting by the way. Have a wonderful weekend. Well done Sara Ella June 10, 2017 at 10:03 AM Thank you Lisa :) It was inspired by an article. I hope you have a great weekend too! <3

Tim Smith June 9, 2017 at 11:03 AM Interesting concept...hope it works...great poem Sara Sara Ella June 9, 2017 at 1:09 PM Thank you Tim :) Yes it would be nice to be able to read and drive!

Akkina Downing June 9, 2017 at 9:30 AM I like your short poem Sara, very nice :) hugs Sara Ella June 9, 2017 at 10:01 AM Thank you Akkina :) Hugs to you <3

Anne-Lise Andresen June 9, 2017 at 8:09 AM - I do not know if I would trust it ... but it's the miracle of the future - Great written, Sara - happy weekend :) Zoooom .... // Anne-Lise :) Sara Ella June 9, 2017 at 10:01 AM Hello Sunshine - change is coming and I hope it is for the better. Thank you :) Have a great weekend!