Zooming Along

Automatic automobiles
      Robotic wheels
           Just roll up and go
                Cross country roads
                No need to steer
           It is computer
      Techno rides
Are almost here
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 4/16/2018 7:52:00 PM
It's amazing to wonder what they will come up with next! I love your creative form!
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Sara Ella
Date: 4/16/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Juliet :) Yes I think technology is fascinating!
Date: 6/28/2017 8:15:00 AM
Thank you Kim :D It would make for an interesting ride!
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Date: 6/28/2017 7:35:00 AM
Should be an interesting ride! Robotic cop pull over...you looked a little dazed. Gives you a ticket to happiness. Just being silly :) a fun write, dear Sara!
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Date: 6/26/2017 10:00:00 PM
oh those should eliminate a lot of accidents if they are all set to accident free mode!! I want one!!!
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/26/2017 11:58:00 PM
Now that would be perfect! Me to!! :D
Date: 6/13/2017 4:56:00 AM
A lovely succinct piece, Sara! The images goes well too! Vroom vroom! Almost here indeed!
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/14/2017 8:20:00 PM
:D It was inspired by an article and just like that - it practically made itself. Glad you like the pic too, I had a hard time choosing. :) Thank you Rick!
Date: 6/12/2017 12:25:00 AM
Oh this made me smile, I adored this!!!
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/12/2017 12:39:00 AM
:D Thank you Arthur!!!
Date: 6/11/2017 9:25:00 AM
Haha, how could I have missed this! Sara and the cars! Wonderful poem and shape my friend <3
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/11/2017 9:33:00 AM
Thank you Darren :) I am learning from reading my favorite poets <3
Date: 6/10/2017 6:00:00 AM
Excellent and interesting concept. Love it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/10/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thank you Ravi :) It was inspired by an article. Who knows what the future brings!
Date: 6/10/2017 5:53:00 AM
Hello Sara. How very true. They call this progress I say not. Give me a regular car that I can have control over and one that won't be breaking down. Nice formatting by the way. Have a wonderful weekend. Well done
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/10/2017 10:03:00 AM
Thank you Lisa :) It was inspired by an article. I hope you have a great weekend too! <3
Date: 6/9/2017 11:03:00 AM
Interesting concept...hope it works...great poem Sara
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/9/2017 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Tim :) Yes it would be nice to be able to read and drive!
Date: 6/9/2017 9:30:00 AM
I like your short poem Sara, very nice :) hugs
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/9/2017 10:01:00 AM
Thank you Akkina :) Hugs to you <3
Date: 6/9/2017 8:09:00 AM
- I do not know if I would trust it ... but it's the miracle of the future - Great written, Sara - happy weekend :) Zoooom .... // Anne-Lise :)
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Sara Ella
Date: 6/9/2017 10:01:00 AM
Hello Sunshine - change is coming and I hope it is for the better. Thank you :) Have a great weekend!
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