Zoo

I once saw a monkey at a zoo, He was swinging, as apes often do. He replied, when I laughed, And he made me look daft: ‘Sure hope I don’t evolve into you.’

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2011 1:27:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2011 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Limericks" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/24/2011 9:27:00 PM

Congrats Jack on another great win with Zoo.. fantastic piece luv..

John Freeman

Date: 10/24/2011 7:41:00 PM

Awesome close on your limerick, my friend, bad when our ancesters can see through us. Smile., jusk joking. Worthy entry my friend. Agape, Moses

Judy Ball

Date: 10/9/2011 9:59:00 AM

This gave me a smile this morning. Too cute and very well done. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/8/2011 6:23:00 PM

Cute one..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Clever work..Enjoyed getting a chuckle this eve..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sorry that you don't have Kashi Go Lean in UK...Sara

Nancy Jones

Date: 10/7/2011 6:12:00 PM

YES! Gotta love them 'telligent 'rillas! Beauty eve to ya, jack~N

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2011 5:56:00 PM

Was this influenced by the movie, Planet of the Apes? Very funny write Jack! Clever words placed masterfully! Great work!!

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/7/2011 5:30:00 PM

Pretty clever moinkey, he'd do well to stay as he is. I like this jack, not only funny, but a statement as well. Harry