Zippety Do Dah My Heart Sings

In evening, the evergreen forest darkens while the cool breeze relaxes my 
thoughts. The lone trees silhouette against the yellow sky and setting sun. Trials are 
ever present in my thoughts; darker thoughts than the serene dusk can muster. 
Candles burn in a row along the porch rail. His dark eyes peer through my reverie to 
touch deep in my soul. He doesn't know how he makes my pulse race and thoughts 
go purely lustful. My reaction has to be kept from his piercing eyes. My eyes roam 
over his face openly in the candle light and lingers on his philtrum...I long to kiss him 
right there, over and over.
    His voice returns my thoughts back to reality, "mam will you need any other 
chores done tonight?" Stammering I say "No...that will be all. tomorrow will be a hard 
day due to the cattle sale. Better get a good nights sleep." The cowboy's hat tips as 
he retreats into the bunk house. I hear the clop of his boots go silent and enjoy the 
view of his backside walking away. Wondering what it would be like to see his eyes 
go to fire at my touch....I have to get a grip on my thoughts....before....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:36 PM
Darlin', I'd be losing my grip too if such a handsome cowboy came over to do chores. I LOVE this poem!! One for my favorites. (Always dreamed of being with a cowboy) Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 8:11 PM
Thanks "so much" for your comment on my "poetry" and can I say "wow" to this write of yours "I wanted" it to go on and on~~
A  Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
Smalling Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 11:27 PM
I just read and embraced the magic of it all ... great write
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Love the wild tall tale that you have told madame...I have been entertained..Mom
Docherty Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Woohoo! That was a tease to the pleasures of the mind, a delight to have read and shared. Appreciate your visit and welcome comments, thankyou...
Knop Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 6:40 AM
Awesome write, Doris!...Enjoy your weekend!...Gert
Freeman Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 8:32 PM
Mummmmmmm! Agape, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:52 PM
wow, you can write some erotica there, Doris. Nicely done!! Zippity do dah DAH. Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 3:33 PM
What a wonderful write Doris.. u are fast becoming Queen of Narratives ..awesome adventure into the forest ..very intriguing..in presentation..luv...
Falotico Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Beautiful write as usally pours from your talented fingers and mind.. luv Michael...just catching up on all I missed this week, long work week..lol love Michael
Austin Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 2:31 PM
Nice fantasy, just a juicy moment in life. What is a philtrum? Sorry about your friend seeing dead people. Hope she is not in too much misery. Dave
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