Zip Lines and Floors

I live in the fall, 
the dying nation between two worlds.
I am barefoot, 
strapped to a catapult. 
I toil where the dark storms brew.
I see you there,
like the armrest between the discomfort, 
and the sadness. 
And I see you standing staunchly, 
as if the answers 
are in the lightning you seek.
It is only me. 
And I reside here, 
where all lands die, 
not where you can find comfort 
in your lost lack of liberation.

I know you wish for color in the grey,
but I am ash in the pot you burned,
not the rainbow for which you yearned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hill Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 3:14 PM
Wonderful work here. Please continue to post your art...
Green Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:56 AM
This was very cool, kind of dark and lonely but that last stanza is incredible in the seriousness of emotion it expresses. The lead in gives us a glimpse of the world as you see it now and that end, just tells us why. Very cool.
Moses Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 12:53 PM
Thank you for the comment :)
Neumann Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 7:11 AM
This is strong and heartfelt. I like this, Kai And it is better to be your own rainbow...
Moses Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 7:24 AM
That is true. Sometimes it hard to see or feel our own colors though. Thank you for the comment.
Smith Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Really great poem Christie...There is a dark and melancholy feel but makes for beautiful poetry... Welcome to PS
Moses Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Thank you very much :)
Dupins Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 10:33 PM
You have some really good lines in this poem! Welcome to poetrysoup!
Moses Avatar
April 24, 2017 at 5:05 AM
Thank you very much.
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