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Zinnia Flowers

“The earth laughs in flowers.” –  Ralph Waldo Emerson

A hummingbird feeds upon bright Spring blooms,
          wings fluttering away.
      As zinnia colors illume,
                    this warm Spring Day.

A butterfly appears in the garden,
          With wispy wings in blue.
      Hoping the hummer will pardon,
                    blessing it through.

Zinnia flowers gushing with color,
          blooms dancing in the breeze.
      Petals shaped in round half dollars.
                    Blossoms appease!

1/8/23 - 
Writing challenge- zip, zig, zag, zing poetry contest, sponsored by Constance LaFrance.
(rhyme zone & howmanysyllables used to check poem)

1st place
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George Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 6:28 AM
Your delightful description of zinnia flowers and the image match beautifully well. Reding this poem is a delight. Congratulations Tania on your great win in the contest.
Kitchin Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Valsa, thank you!
Kauffman Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 12:17 PM
Tania, congratulations on your win. This is a poem filled with the delight of these rainbow hued flowers that are so pleasing to the eye and so joyful! Enjoyed this trip into the spring garden in the middle of winter. Blessings!
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:16 PM
Sam, thank you!
La France Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 7:38 AM
Tania, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Challenge - Zip, Zig, Zag, Zing, I love your poem, quote and image, well done, Constance
Kitchin Avatar
January 24, 2023 at 2:17 PM
Constance, thank you!
Roper Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Awesome verse, Tania. Congratulations on your 1st place win in Constance’s contest. Hugs blessings, Eve
Kitchin Avatar
January 19, 2023 at 4:11 PM
Eve, thank you!
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 3:22 AM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Zinnias offer a different kind of beauty to a garden. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Sara, thank you!
Alex Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:37 PM
Beautiful writing on one of the most beautiful flowers. Congratulations!
Kitchin Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Chris, thank you!
Seeker Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 7:29 PM
Lovely poem, brilliant quote! Warmest congratulations on your win, Tania
Kitchin Avatar
January 18, 2023 at 2:51 PM
US, thank you!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 5:44 PM
Beautiful! Love the quote too! Congratulations, Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Kim, thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 2:21 AM
Wow what a bright poem. I love zinnias. Such beautiful flowers. Best for a win.
Kitchin Avatar
January 9, 2023 at 3:33 AM
Victor, thank you!
Babcock Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Love the images and so looking forward to spring with butterflies and flowers. It has been a long cold winter so far and this makes me dream of warmer days. love phyl
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Phyllis, thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 8:12 AM
Love the imagery in your verse Tania, like Lin I'm looking forward to spring already. Hope you're having a lovely weekend. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Tom, thank you and yes, I am dreaming about Spring, hope your weekend is going well too!
Lane Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 7:47 AM
Tania, your words are so true to reality that they make me wish Spring was near!
Kitchin Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 8:19 AM
Lin, thank you and thanks for your visit!
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