Zig-Zag

Reverse this polarity, my hormonal engine Playing my body like a baby grand Rough and rugged, Jerry Lee Lewis Succumbs to Louis Armstrong in Platinum Blues verses boogy woogy An invariable blender, shaken not stirred Keeping me up nights Tapping my toes to the teardrops entered for consideration in MJ's contest, "Let's get untwisted"

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John Freeman

Date: 6/23/2009 7:08:00 PM

I was teenager in the days when "The Twist" was popular, Jerry Lee, also, I'll let you wounder about the rest! God bless

L'Nass Shango

Date: 6/5/2009 12:36:00 PM

Like a jazz vibration caressing my brain this poem moves with the power of a train. Love it!

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/2/2009 6:24:00 PM

@.@ woooow that was dizzy, that was awsome, my head is falling appart, waterfalling in layers; thanks a lot for the experience!!!=D

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 5/13/2009 8:01:00 PM

Dear Sandra,Great POEM for Michael's Contest It doesn't sound like YOU untwisted YOU still LOVE both "Blues and Boogy Woogy" Superb Talent I fell in LOVE with YOU after I read YOUR Gracious Comment On my POEM English Language (Part 1) Would YOU please read some of my Hodgepodge POETRY Thank-YOU I have tomorrow off will talk and read more of YOU then ALWAYS...HG

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/13/2009 2:46:00 PM

this is cool.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/1/2009 6:10:00 PM

This is awesome, Alexandra! Such a clever take on "Let's get untwisted"! The bipolar interpretation, especially comparing Jerry Lee Lewis to Louis Armtrong, is brilliant! I'm leaving early tomorrow to go deep sea fishing for a few days. I'll write when I get back. I do think you have a winner here! Love to you, dear.