Zero Miles Away

zero miles away the lightning strikes - a cobra with fangs 4/6/2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2022 10:38:00 PM

The way it snakes up and lashes out, you have nailed lighting's movements!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:24:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/7/2022 4:12:00 AM

Whoa~~ Very expressive and creative work. I think lightning could be compared to a cobra. It can be as deadly if one is in its path. I enjoyed reading. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:44:00 AM

When my husband went to weather.com, it said our storm was zero miles away. Quite the thunder and lightning storm!

Chris Con

Date: 4/7/2022 12:54:00 AM

Are there cobra's without fangs?

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:45:00 AM

I have no idea. The metaphor representative of the strong storm :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/6/2022 10:33:00 PM

Not a pleasant situation. Wonder how to defend yourself. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:46:00 AM

Hunker down..that is it. Listening to make sure no hail…then we would go downstairs.

Anselmo Boles

Date: 4/6/2022 8:48:00 PM

A high voltage electric snake! Stunningly wicked...ab

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/7/2022 6:46:00 AM

For sure…lol