Zephyr

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Zen, Zinnia, Zephyr words Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France 04/21/24

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Tall trees sway with ease In a warm gentle breeze Bright blossoms are dancing This sight’s so entrancing The weather is quite mild Though my hair, newly styled Blows freely in the air But I don’t really care Mother Nature provides The winds and the tides When I’m walking outside My sheer joy I can’t hide

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2024 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Zephyr" write. I wish I lived by the sea... Have a blessed weekend..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2024 10:25:00 AM

- Jan, congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2024 1:55:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, I love the image too, Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2024 1:45:00 AM

I am off contests these days. Living on an island like me one appreciates the lovely zephyr that blows softly at sunset. Great poem. Best for a win. hugs.

Lin Lane

Date: 4/22/2024 10:17:00 AM

So often you've told me about your walks. Overlooking the sea must be spellbinding, Jan. It would be for me. I live near a huge lake, but the sea... ahh that's different. Let your hair blow in the sea breeze.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/22/2024 4:16:00 AM

You make me want to walk right into that beautiful zephyr Wind Jan. Your words are whimsical and beautiful, photo accompaniment is perfect, have a wonderful day filled with God's blessings. :)

Ts Poetry

Date: 4/21/2024 7:43:00 PM

Must be amazing living by the sea

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/21/2024 6:40:00 PM

Dear Jan, You have captured the simple joys of being immersed in nature's embrace. The imagery of tall trees swaying, bright blossoms dancing, and the gentle breeze tousling your hair showing a picture of tranquility and contentment. Amidst the winds and tides of Mother Nature's symphony, you find pure joy in the moment, reveling in the beauty that surrounds you. I loved how your words are to appreciate the small pleasures. - Blessings, Daniel