Zephyr

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Zen, Zinnia, Zephyr words Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France 04/21/24

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Tall trees sway with ease
In a warm gentle breeze
Bright blossoms are dancing
This sight’s so entrancing

The weather is quite mild
Though my hair, newly styled
Blows freely in the air
But I don’t really care

Mother Nature provides
The winds and the tides
When I’m walking outside
My sheer joy I can’t hide

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/6/2024 12:03:00 PM

Jan, this is a pleasure to read. I think you are giving me the biggest smile I've had today! We say we like wholesome food to eat, and this is a wholesome poem to feed the brain. It's a celebration of life! TY

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/27/2024 2:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Zephyr" write. I wish I lived by the sea... Have a blessed weekend..................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/27/2024 10:25:00 AM

- Jan, congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Constance La France

Date: 4/26/2024 1:55:00 PM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, I love the image too, Constance

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/23/2024 1:45:00 AM

I am off contests these days. Living on an island like me one appreciates the lovely zephyr that blows softly at sunset. Great poem. Best for a win. hugs.

Lin Lane

Date: 4/22/2024 10:17:00 AM

So often you've told me about your walks. Overlooking the sea must be spellbinding, Jan. It would be for me. I live near a huge lake, but the sea... ahh that's different. Let your hair blow in the sea breeze.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/22/2024 4:16:00 AM

You make me want to walk right into that beautiful zephyr Wind Jan. Your words are whimsical and beautiful, photo accompaniment is perfect, have a wonderful day filled with God's blessings. :)

Ts Poetry

Date: 4/21/2024 7:43:00 PM

Must be amazing living by the sea

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/21/2024 6:40:00 PM

Dear Jan, You have captured the simple joys of being immersed in nature's embrace. The imagery of tall trees swaying, bright blossoms dancing, and the gentle breeze tousling your hair showing a picture of tranquility and contentment. Amidst the winds and tides of Mother Nature's symphony, you find pure joy in the moment, reveling in the beauty that surrounds you. I loved how your words are to appreciate the small pleasures. - Blessings, Daniel