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April. 21. 2024
Zen, Zinnia,  Zephyr, Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor. Constance La France

 

“When I felt lonely and betrayed, God’s words, ‘Do not fear, for I am with you; do not be dismayed, for I am your God’ fell into my ears as a soothing zephyr” By Poet
Night fades away slow and steady, As the sun makes his triumphant entry. Zephyr wind comes to caress me, Mischievously tangling my hair. I feel her breath upon my whole body, On my cheeks, in my hair and on my face. She comes like a magical genie, Somewhere from a hidden covert. She comes on unfurled feathery wings. Her arrival gives such a calming feel. Sometimes she blows with wild abandon. With no physical form, she is an invisible spirit, An unshackled flow of current. If we try to harness her, She will slip out of control. She is subtle with power. All I can feel is her soft touch, And all I hear is her soft susurration As she passes along vales and dales. She dances among the leaves of trees Sings to flowers, beasts and birds Makes them pulsate with life Gives them their resonant song She curls the still waters into silvery folds Croft and fields await her presence She makes the hot day sweet and balmy She is warmly welcomed in scorched lands But she won’t stay long to cheer our frayed nerves She seems to belong to the gypsy tribe, Never pitching her tent in a place to belong. From far I hear the fluting song of reeds, Suggesting she has withdrawn from my presence. She is like the spirit of liberty, wild and free. None can fetter her with a rope or string. Oh Zephyr, so breezy, lovely and cool Of all the winds, I love you the most.

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Date: 4/27/2024 2:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Zephyr" write with a wonderful quote/ending.... Have a blessed weekend..................
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Date: 4/27/2024 10:37:00 AM
- A wonderful poem ... sensitively written, Valsa :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 4/27/2024 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations Valsa with your top placement in this poetry contest with a lovely poem which flows smoothly like the Zephyr "on unfurled feathery wings.". Wish you a pleasant weekend.
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Date: 4/26/2024 7:24:00 PM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem, I love your quote too, Constance
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Date: 4/26/2024 10:35:00 PM
Thank you dear Constance for the great placement given to my poem.
Date: 4/23/2024 11:38:00 AM
Loved your poem on gentle wind Zephyer. Lots of imagery and emotions from a creative poet.
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Date: 4/23/2024 7:37:00 AM
a magical poem, i love the images creative, and the message of the zephyr , well done poet
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Date: 4/23/2024 2:52:00 AM
Dear Valsa, what a beautiful poem on the gentle wing mostly known as Zephyr. Great descriptions with controlled emotions, and imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/23/2024 2:29:00 AM
Youve depicted zephyr so well here dear valsa, as always with your seamless lines that flow in such eloquence. How the zephyr wind comes and embrace you, youv described that in a way that, readers can feel and see through your well articulated lines! I felt the breeze as i read the first stanza and then how youv written “ She comes like a magical genie, Somewhere from a hidden covert. She comes on unfurled feathery wings. Her arrival gives such a calming feel.“ soo soothing! And soulful! Fave!
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Date: 4/21/2024 5:05:00 PM
Your detailed language about the mischievous and untamed wind captivated me. I was totally enchanted with your respect, love, and admiration for Zephyr is so subtly stated. (She is like the spirit of liberty.) Your poem was just a delight to read. Best wishes with the contest--this is a solid entry for sure! hugs, Sara
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Date: 4/21/2024 9:05:00 AM
Dear Valsa, The ethereal and transient Zephyr breeze is the subject of your magnificent poetry. Also discussed are the speaker's respect for the wind, its power to infuse the earth with life and motion, and the wind's untamed and otherworldly nature. The evocative and detailed language you chose to describe the Zephyr breeze was spot on. Strange and enchanting sounding words like "magical genie," "unshackled flow of current," and "soft susurration" are used to describe this phenomenon. The use of personification occurs when you give the wind human characteristics, such as the ability to dance among the leaves and sing to flowers. My best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 4/21/2024 8:01:00 AM
A nice breeze when it gets hot in late spring, early summer to late fall is wonderful. You have personified her very well. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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