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August 17, 2023

Contest : X  Or Y Or Z Words

Sponsored by : Constance La France

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“In the surge of love the transient beauty needs to be held close in heart lest it flies away in zephyr” – Quote by Poet Joy beads on your face in the wind rolled, the ebony hair defiant, fluttered uncontrolled. Some swirled squally over untamed gale’s wing, the forehead lattice captured my surging yearning, lest like the cloud it drifted away. The sculpted design of hazel eyes closed sly, like fascinating folded flaps of blushed butterfly. The onyx eyelashes lined the lissome lids with glee, concealed dreams in the fathomless depth of azure sea, lest like the birds they soared away. The lilac petals of the luscious lips pressed, kept the sensuous silence of longing suppressed, carved on your face the alluring contours with ease, rippling on the petals of your floral smile, I found freeze, lest like the rhapsody rose it withered away. The radiant supple cheeks subtly caressed by suffusing fuchsia touch of the aura of sunset sky, color of love dripped from the pallete of my mind, beguiled, I etched in my heart your image in the wind, lest like a leaf in zephyr your beauty flew away.

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Date: 9/12/2023 5:55:00 PM
Subimal, wonderful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the quote, Constance
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Date: 8/18/2023 12:12:00 PM
Oh yes! I see why this was a top winner! Great imagery and phrasing such as: The sculpted design of hazel eyes… Congratulations, Subimal!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/20/2023 10:04:00 PM
Thank you, Kim for your encouraging comments I value so much.
Date: 8/17/2023 10:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem, GL in contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/20/2023 10:03:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/17/2023 9:33:00 AM
"Good Luck" on your "Zephyr" write. I enjoyed reading this one. I also put "Z" in. Have a great day writing away.............
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/20/2023 10:03:00 PM
Thank you, Paula.

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