Zephyr

zephyr gentle zephyr blows leaf shivers on kiss of breeze... wind suddenly stops 07/23/20 Second Place 'Haiku or Senryu' Contest by Constance La France . . .

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/2/2020 5:15:00 AM

Love the 'leaf shivers' image. Congrats on your win, Anisha.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/2/2020 8:45:00 PM

Thanks n Love

Constance La France

Date: 7/29/2020 5:00:00 PM

Anisha, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this wonderful write _Constance

Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/2/2020 8:44:00 PM

Thanks n Love

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/28/2020 12:13:00 PM

That's such a creative and soothing one Ma'am. A fave for me. Congratulations on your win! :)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/28/2020 8:58:00 PM

Thanks n Blesing

V. Deepa

Date: 7/27/2020 1:30:00 AM

Beautiful imagery Anisha mam:-) Loved the second line.Congrats on your wonderful win.keep inspiring. Warmest regards~Deepa:-)

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/27/2020 5:21:00 AM

Thanks n Blessings

Jenish Somadas

Date: 7/26/2020 10:44:00 PM

leaf shivers on kiss of breeze...Lovely Haiku.. Congrats on your win Anisha..

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/27/2020 5:22:00 AM

Thanks Jenish. Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2020 7:40:00 PM

I really loved this image. Congrats on your win.

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/26/2020 9:21:00 PM

Thanks n love.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/26/2020 4:14:00 PM

Anisha, congratulations on your win with these beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Anisha Dutta
Date: 7/26/2020 9:21:00 PM

Thanks n Regards.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/26/2020 4:06:00 PM

lovely imagery Anisha, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/26/2020 11:08:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)