Zen Mode

mind the gap between thoughts for that is where I dwell

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/17/2023 9:23:00 PM

Change 'mind' to 'mined' and you can see the double-edged sword that all thoughts constitute. How they are swallowed makes them into marshmallows --- or flaming swords! Kudos, Gershon

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/18/2023 7:18:00 PM

Brilliant!!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/17/2023 7:26:00 PM

Oh, wonderful! I’ve sought in silence, in stillness, and have quite the life between thought , but not sought it. After reading this wonder i definitely will. Many thanks with bear hugs! sally

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/18/2023 7:17:00 PM

If we invite grace, the universe responds. Heart must be pure, however and trust childlike.