Zen Mode

There is no out-breath
For when we exhale
Centred in the void
It becomes our in-breath

There is no in-breath
What enters, is grace
At play in our system
Enlivening feeble form 

17-November-2022
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Blown Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 4:50 PM
...nice write...grace...wrt physics....means some...potential exists....in spelling ideas ......stan sand
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November 17, 2022 at 6:54 PM
https://www.theosophy.world/encyclopedia/koilon
Buhagiar Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 8:25 AM
Grace is our only solution.
Seeker Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 6:52 PM
We must invite grace otherwise it will not enter. Is our heart cleansed, prepared, eager, to receive grace?
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