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Zen

Quote: "In zen we don't find the answers. We lose the questions." ..zen philosophy

Beneath the plum tree by the Zen pond's side, 
Its vivid hues reflected in the water's glide, 
Autumn leaves, a kaleidoscope in motion,  
Swim with carps, in a colorful perpetual devotion. 

The optimist gazes, sky-bound, feeling free,  
As leaves brush top of the tree, a sight to see,  
But the pessimist sees inspirations wane,  
Leaves wither, decay, in autumn's refrain. 

The autumn moon, its silver light cascades,  
Galaxies, stars, in its gentle tirades,  
The universe contained, in tranquil grace,  
Even a plum leaf's fall stirs the quiet space. 

What is the sound in silence's domain?  
Who listens to its whisper, its refrain?  
The peaceful heart hums, a silent song's plea,  
Yet ponders, who hears its melody free?
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Zen" write/quote/beautiful picture. Love This One... Have a blessed weekend..................
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 10:29 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend, Jay :) - hugs
Guptar Avatar
April 27, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Congratulations Jay for your top placement in this contest with a lovely write "Beneath the plum tree by the Zen pond's side". Particularly appreciated following lines: "The universe contained, in tranquil grace, Even a plum leaf's fall stirs the quiet space. "
La France Avatar
April 26, 2024 at 1:58 PM
Jay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellent poem, I love the image and quote too, Constance
Dietrich Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 2:57 PM
Love how you did Zen. You thought outside the box. I was taking it too literally so I avoided it!
Xiang Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Beautiful. I sense a whiff of Whitman in your wit. I love your last line. Very Heisenberg.
Poet Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 10:25 AM
Serenity, equilibrium, and peace of mind are all zen, Jay, very well-crafted entry for the contest...
Andresen Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 10:14 AM
- Zen, in harmony and peace - I like your contribution to the contest, Jay ... good luck :) - hugs
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