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Zealous Waves

Clad in doldrum
with yarns of fuchsia

hemmed here & there
twisted amidst the layers

& simulacrum

esoteric verse
slicked in ethereal

& outvying
of vehemences, I goad

to scatter zeal
into the waves 

grand & unbiased

while perching with 
a quintessence unclasps

to the orbs thence
& the musings of yours
undying zest 

for morrowing unfolding

in yearnings
& beyond.

1St Place Contest Winner

Written: July 13, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Christuraj Alex July 20, 2022 at 7:54 AM "to scatter zeal into the waves" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong July 19, 2022 at 8:07 PM This is marvelous Lasaad. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win my friend. Blessings xxoo

Unseeking Seeker July 19, 2022 at 7:50 PM A brilliant write, Sotto! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win! That too, in Brian’s contest ~ praise from Caesar!

Valsa George July 18, 2022 at 9:59 PM Hi Lasaad, so happy for you ! Congratulations on your trophy win ......!

Beata Agustin July 18, 2022 at 9:13 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.

Regina Mcintosh July 18, 2022 at 8:08 AM Congrats sweet friend. God bless you and be with you, Love, Gina

Bill Baker July 16, 2022 at 8:23 AM Exquisite imagery and descriptions, Lasaad. great entry for the contest. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Vijay Pandit July 14, 2022 at 7:06 AM You search the depths of poetry in exquisite imagery my friend--splendid vocabulary in musings--in yearnings and beyond.

Heidi Sands July 14, 2022 at 6:45 AM Beautifully written. Very nice :)

Valsa George July 14, 2022 at 6:29 AM Esoteric in every sense with deeper layers of meaning, I am unable to fathom ! An appropriate entry for Brian's contest ! Win big, dear friend !

Kim Rodrigues July 14, 2022 at 5:47 AM An interesting write…enticing! Love the setup of first several lines!

Regina Mcintosh July 14, 2022 at 3:26 AM Wonderful. love it. God bless you. Love, Gina

Demetrios Trifiatis July 14, 2022 at 1:40 AM A panoramic view of poetic beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings

Victor Buhagiar July 14, 2022 at 1:29 AM Perfect esoteric verse.