Zealous Waves Premiere Contest Winner

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Clad in doldrum
with yarns of fuchsia

hemmed here & there
twisted amidst the layers

& simulacrum

esoteric verse
slicked in ethereal

& outvying
of vehemences, I goad

to scatter zeal
into the waves 

grand & unbiased

while perching with 
a quintessence unclasps

to the orbs thence
& the musings of yours
undying zest 

for morrowing unfolding

in yearnings
& beyond.

1St Place Contest Winner

Written: July 13, 2022

A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE Poetry Contest
 Sponsored by: Brian Strand

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 7/20/2022 7:54:00 AM
"to scatter zeal into the waves" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/19/2022 8:07:00 PM
This is marvelous Lasaad. Congratulations on your wonderful trophy win my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/19/2022 7:50:00 PM
A brilliant write, Sotto! Warmest congratulations on your trophy win! That too, in Brian’s contest ~ praise from Caesar!
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Date: 7/18/2022 9:59:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, so happy for you ! Congratulations on your trophy win ......!
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Date: 7/18/2022 9:13:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
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Date: 7/18/2022 8:08:00 AM
Congrats sweet friend. God bless you and be with you, Love, Gina
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Date: 7/16/2022 8:23:00 AM
Exquisite imagery and descriptions, Lasaad. great entry for the contest. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 7/14/2022 7:06:00 AM
You search the depths of poetry in exquisite imagery my friend--splendid vocabulary in musings--in yearnings and beyond.
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:45:00 AM
Beautifully written. Very nice :)
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Date: 7/14/2022 6:29:00 AM
Esoteric in every sense with deeper layers of meaning, I am unable to fathom ! An appropriate entry for Brian's contest ! Win big, dear friend !
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Date: 7/14/2022 5:47:00 AM
An interesting write…enticing! Love the setup of first several lines!
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Date: 7/14/2022 3:26:00 AM
Wonderful. love it. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/14/2022 1:40:00 AM
A panoramic view of poetic beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Blessings
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Date: 7/14/2022 1:29:00 AM
Perfect esoteric verse.
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