Zealous Love

I long to see you like a starry sky,
when it is winter.

When time comes for us to meet,
I'll pray that the Sun will stop setting;
giving us time to hold each other's arms for eternity.

"We will never age; we will forever be in love!"
I whisper with faith in my heart.....



Date of Entry: 25/04/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davey Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 12:41 PM
To hold those moments of pure love in your heart forever by somehow stopping time right then would be the happiest time in my life that's for sure! Congrats on your win
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:46 AM
Me too, Brian! Those are moments one wishes had the ability of manipulating time at will, lolest. Thanks so much for your kind applause! :)
Scars Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 7:12 AM
beautiful and romantic sweet Teddy, thank you and congrats :)
Kimathi Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 3:43 AM
You're welcome, Laura. Thank you too, for your warm applause! *^_^*
A. Sharma Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Congrats on ur deserved win Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 6:10 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Upma! *^_^*
A  Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 5:23 PM
Teddy <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 6:09 AM
Hi Skat. Thank you for your warm applause, and featuring us all the WINNERS in your blog! It's lovely indeed! Have a blissful evening! *^_^* <3
A   Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 2:48 PM
Teddy, Congratulations!!! Stopping by to enjoy last night's winning poems --once again. Thank you for supporting my tiny contest... :) LINDA
Kimathi Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:02 AM
You are always welcome Linda! ^_^ Thank you for your applause! <3 <3 <3
Mehta Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Congratulation on the fine win, thanks for sharing this lovely poem, teddy
Kimathi Avatar
May 8, 2014 at 1:07 AM
Thanks again for your kind words Dr. Ram Mehta!
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