Zealots

Zealots are totally incapable of any emotion other than rage. It is an unalterable law that people who claim to care about the human race are utterly indifferent to the sufferings of individuals.
— Quentin Crisp

ZEALOTS

The raging machine, storms of zigzagging arrows, fueled by each word that bounces off the trampoline of their eardrums. A zealot sage, an oxymoronic knight, not a saint. Stained not with tears but billowing eyes and cheeks.

emotional wreck
concentrated on one theme
no deviation

The heave and the ho of heavy sacks. Teamwork in torrent. The zealot doesn’t stop to hear a prophet, except Simon. Simon will buzz in their ear about a diamond but the team has their eyes on the gold. With cold, strong hands, they sharpen their swords, meditating on the prize. They want to topsy-turvy, throw out the law, upturn the tables of dirty coins.

if one turned his head
a scene of perfect substance -
heals blind, deaf and dumb

Does the tyrant trump the zealot, or is power the point? Both explode. Not on their sides, you will be imprisoned or stomped out. Simple Simon was a zealot whose ears steared toward the Son of God.

Simon the Zealot
apostles known by their works
one’s tax collector

Zealots loose whilst hell’s hammer wills the fastening of cruel suffering. This innocent has the right approach to rid the world of tyrants though the chariots have not entered the course. The zealots would still be wielding their swords as the stone was kicked away in a powerful way.

Zealots have their way
the martyrs follow Christ’s way
Simon chose wisely
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Lindley Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 6:40 AM
My good friend, this is indeed a very fine poem on zealots and the terrible bad they do in their blindness and zeal. Truly a fine gem you have gifted us and a true pleasure to read this fine morn. A fav, again your verses enter this old poet's heart. God bless.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 6:04 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend!
George Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 2:44 AM
Great composition on Zealots, the fanatics. Their tactis was using weapons. Though Simon was a Zealot, he was one of the apostles who set out into the wider world to spread the word of God. Very true to the Bible dear Kim. Congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Thank you, Valsa!
Alex Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 7:19 PM
Great work on ZEALOTS. Simon, the zealot, tyrant trump the zealot... Great! Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 5:59 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Sambourne Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:02 PM
Quite an impressive, remarkably inclusive poetic take on "zealots." Biblically thorough, too. We learn much from your posting. Congratulations! Brian
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Thank you, Brian! I appreciate you!
Poet Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Kim, thanks for your new word. Never read it before I read your exquisite poem that I realized the true significance of the term.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Legros Kelley Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Wow, this has captivated me as I read through, very descriptive. 'Stained not with tears but billowing eyes and cheeks.' brought images to my mind, though one can chuckle at the very description, in reality, oh gosh, no laughing matter. The angry stompers who would with no restraint, huff, puff and stomp others. Your poem is amazing, such a great write!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 3:31 PM
I really appreciate you, BJ! Thank you!
Volumes Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 8:36 PM
So interesting Kim. I learnt a new word. I never realized the actual meaning until i read your wonderful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2023 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, SV!
Wolf Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Zealot - tends to yell-lot! (gw rhyming dictionary).
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 8:15 PM
Probably so!
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