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Going to the mailbox with Ambien dreams
A sleep walking journey or so it seems
Neighbor took only one glance
Laughed, "You're not wearing no pants"
Awakened by my wife's horrid screams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Larry in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Congrats Larry on your big win in John's contest with this original and unique creative write.. enjoy another biggie my friend.. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:58 PM
haha, Good one and congratulations, Larry!
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:34 PM
Congratulations Larry. Agape, Moses
Freeman Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:33 PM
Congratulations Larr on your third place, Agape, Moses
Johnson Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 9:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Did MIL see it? LOL Great write, my friend. Good luck. Ralph
Culverhouse Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 5:01 PM
funny...be very careful with those ambien's my father in law has done alot of crazy things taking them. fighting imaginary boogers, driving and wrecking, running around the neighbor hood necked and getting lost etc.
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Larry. Love, Carol
Reger Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 5:24 AM
hehehe! i like it. :)
Galua Avatar
July 22, 2010 at 12:08 AM
lol....thank you for making me laugh,,,this line is just so funny..hahaha..."You're not wearing no pants" Awakened by my wife's horrid screams
Roberts Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 11:03 PM
funny one Larry, good luck in the contest
Arteaga Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 10:08 PM
so it was your wife dream or yours? that was the only teeny tiny confusing part for me :P all in all funny! good one larry :D
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