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You'Ve Got Mail

Going to the mailbox with Ambien dreams A sleep walking journey or so it seems Neighbor took only one glance Laughed, "You're not wearing no pants" Awakened by my wife's horrid screams

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2010 12:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem Larry in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/23/2010 9:36:00 AM

Congrats Larry on your big win in John's contest with this original and unique creative write.. enjoy another biggie my friend.. with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2010 9:58:00 PM

haha, Good one and congratulations, Larry!

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2010 9:34:00 PM

Congratulations Larry. Agape, Moses

John Freeman

Date: 7/22/2010 9:33:00 PM

Congratulations Larr on your third place, Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/22/2010 9:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 7/22/2010 7:22:00 PM

Did MIL see it? LOL Great write, my friend. Good luck. Ralph

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/22/2010 5:01:00 PM

funny...be very careful with those ambien's my father in law has done alot of crazy things taking them. fighting imaginary boogers, driving and wrecking, running around the neighbor hood necked and getting lost etc.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/22/2010 11:56:00 AM

Today as I read this piece you have written I am thankful that you have shared it with us. I hope you will present us with more of your poetry in the near future. Don't let your ink dry out. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Larry. Love, Carol