Yours

I understand
the need for redemption
when all they do is ask about me
and the phone company has never
even heard your voice.

The scar on your leg
hasn't yet faded from our accident
four years ago (you study those
scars every day, as if searching
for blame)

and you find it

buried beneath cobwebs of
false hope and deflected
stories of the life you had
and the life you have…
I can do no right
here, within the 
wish-I-was.

If I were stronger maybe
or you less so,
I’d bandage your wounds 
and rock you to sleep
but you are motion-sick
and healing just fine
without me.

How long before the
questions subside?
Will you answer in the
voice of pride, or reason?
Six years’ fallacy, or
merely unfortunate?

My legs are torn too,
but I don't wear shorts in the summertime
(I never tan anyway)
and I never said I was beautiful.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006



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Date: 3/7/2009 5:40:00 PM
Raw and powerful emotions that you've expressed extremely well. Very brave and real writing.
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Date: 3/4/2009 4:20:00 PM
"Buried beneath cobwebs of false hope and deflected stories of the life you once had") Awesome write!!Very deep and intriguing... Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week.God Bless~Tyesha
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Date: 3/4/2009 8:28:00 AM
Very eloquent. I like the way you never really mention what the accident was and instead focus on the reshaping your subject has done as far as who he/she (I'm guessing a he btw) believes is at fault. In my experience this reshaping can last a lifetime and tends to get stronger as a person completely reinvents the situation as they saw it. This is why insurance company's have their own claims investigators, since both victims will remember contradicting events to justify their blame/resentment
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Date: 3/4/2009 6:56:00 AM
Tracy very deep and emotional write - congratulations on being featured this week - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 3/3/2009 1:16:00 PM
Congratulations on "Yours" being featured, Tracy. Vince
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Date: 3/2/2009 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem so sad! Laura :(
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Date: 3/2/2009 1:41:00 PM
Ah, but you are ... smile ... and this is a beautiful write asking only to not be judged ... congratulations, Tracy on your writing being selected this week at the Soup!!
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Date: 3/2/2009 12:04:00 PM
Tracy congratulations on this fabulous write being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2009 5:38:00 AM
Tracy, wow, an incredible write. Warmest congrats on being featured this week. Miss you! Love, Shar
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Date: 3/1/2009 6:15:00 PM
Wow! Much to think about in your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Way to go! Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/1/2009 5:30:00 PM
So well done, Tracy! Glad this was featured, so more will have to chance to read it! ~Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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