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If only this poetry could define, how your presence takes me towards cloud nine. Your touch brings sensations that feel divine, yet, my tongue is quiet, fighting this muse of mine. Waiting for the moment our lips can greet, your sweet voice takes control of my heartbeat. I sigh hallelujah, as our eyes meet, the taste of your mouth makes my life complete. Suddenly the pen flows like buoyant streams, describing love that's only seen in daydreams. I'm just a star within universal schemes, basking within the passion of your moonbeams. Our love can't be hidden in a metaphor, you're the poem my pen will always adore.
Silent One 3 February 2019

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Date: 5/26/2019 10:17:00 AM
I am exactly singing hallelujah I as I read this wonder of a poem. Great, Silent One
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Date: 3/6/2019 4:53:00 PM
Hello Silent One, Oh my gosh!!! This is a lovely poem that you have created. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/4/2019 1:43:00 PM
Wow. That was passionate! Good job Silent One. Blessings, Susan
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Date: 3/3/2019 1:48:00 PM
Love can' t be hidden inside a (metaphor) a word...picture....that is not easy to conceive from the surface of our gazing eyes..Nice tie into the picture without words to define the meaning behind your minds writing.
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Date: 2/25/2019 8:14:00 PM
Well, hot dang! Steamy and sweet! This is pretty darn good, my friend. (((Hugs)))
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Date: 2/17/2019 12:51:00 PM
This has the X Factor..WoWzer :)
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Date: 2/16/2019 7:38:00 PM
Hello silent One, this reads as a love poem to me. A great poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 2/10/2019 8:39:00 PM
This is aesthetically done Silent One!!
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Date: 2/7/2019 11:37:00 AM
Excellent my friend...
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Date: 2/7/2019 5:42:00 AM
You presented love the way it would choose its own showcase. Salute!
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Date: 2/4/2019 12:24:00 PM
A wonderful love poem, romantic and sensual - a great read Silent One. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/4/2019 9:10:00 AM
Love is indeed a fount of inspiration, S-1. Most enjoyable. Regards // paul
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Date: 2/4/2019 8:03:00 AM
Hi Silent, exceptional work once again my friend. The love flows from your pen onto the page. This is such a wonderful Sonnet. The emotions flow within my heart as I read your gentle words. A most wonderful fave my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 2/4/2019 4:28:00 AM
I do love when you write in rhyme! And this poem Is a beautiful depiction of a special relationship with your muse. Another favorite!!
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Date: 2/4/2019 4:15:00 AM
If only my words could render the feelings of pleasure and amazement while reading your stunning poem! I read it over and over! A wonderful poem that satisfies an avid reader's finest aspirations! A masterpiece rich in beauty and meaning.. It touches the depths of my heart and basks into my fave list.. deserving praise and honour. Deepest regards Silent One.
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Date: 2/3/2019 9:49:00 PM
A lovely sonnet with a perfect ending Silent, : )
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Date: 2/3/2019 7:12:00 PM
I don't know where you get the ink for your pen but i want some. Great poetry!
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Date: 2/3/2019 6:22:00 PM
Great last line Silent..Very nicely penned
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Date: 2/3/2019 6:17:00 PM
And this is how it should be. Love as one. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:18:00 PM
quite a lovely and romantic sonnet there, Silent One!
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Date: 2/3/2019 4:18:00 PM
Romantic indeed - thanks for visiting my site
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Date: 2/3/2019 2:02:00 PM
WoW! Silent, This beautiful and romantic at the same time. Great song selection to accompany your well written poem. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/3/2019 1:44:00 PM
Just beautiful!
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Date: 2/3/2019 12:54:00 PM
VERY lovely, S.O. Janice
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Silent One
Date: 2/3/2019 1:01:00 PM
Thank you Janice..
Date: 2/3/2019 11:41:00 AM
Brilliant Silent One...
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Silent One
Date: 2/3/2019 1:01:00 PM
Thanks Mark..
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