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If only this poetry could define, how your presence takes me towards cloud nine. Your touch brings sensations that feel divine, yet, my tongue is quiet, fighting this muse of mine. Waiting for the moment our lips can greet, your sweet voice takes control of my heartbeat. I sigh hallelujah, as our eyes meet, the taste of your mouth makes my life complete. Suddenly the pen flows like buoyant streams, describing love that's only seen in daydreams. I'm just a star within universal schemes, basking within the passion of your moonbeams. Our love can't be hidden in a metaphor, you're the poem my pen will always adore. Silent One 3 February 2019

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Harry Horsman

Date: 2/26/2022 10:03:00 PM

Checking out, one of your oldies, the precious poetry is still there as is the wonderful sentiment.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/22/2020 2:24:00 AM

you're the poem my pen will always adore... wow.. so beautiful..

Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/30/2019 1:31:00 AM

Truly a master...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/22/2019 2:04:00 PM

A very hot and passionate poem. love phyl

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 5/26/2019 10:17:00 AM

I am exactly singing hallelujah I as I read this wonder of a poem. Great, Silent One

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/6/2019 4:53:00 PM

Hello Silent One, Oh my gosh!!! This is a lovely poem that you have created. have a nice evening my friend.

Susan Jeavons

Date: 3/4/2019 1:43:00 PM

Wow. That was passionate! Good job Silent One. Blessings, Susan

Holly Bohto

Date: 3/3/2019 1:48:00 PM

Love can' t be hidden inside a (metaphor) a word...picture....that is not easy to conceive from the surface of our gazing eyes..Nice tie into the picture without words to define the meaning behind your minds writing.

Berteena Harmony Of The Soul

Date: 2/25/2019 8:14:00 PM

Well, hot dang! Steamy and sweet! This is pretty darn good, my friend. (((Hugs)))

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/17/2019 12:51:00 PM

This has the X Factor..WoWzer :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/16/2019 7:38:00 PM

Hello silent One, this reads as a love poem to me. A great poem. Have a nice evening my friend.

Bobby May

Date: 2/10/2019 8:39:00 PM

This is aesthetically done Silent One!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 2/7/2019 11:37:00 AM

Excellent my friend...

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 2/7/2019 5:42:00 AM

You presented love the way it would choose its own showcase. Salute!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/4/2019 12:24:00 PM

A wonderful love poem, romantic and sensual - a great read Silent One. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/4/2019 9:10:00 AM

Love is indeed a fount of inspiration, S-1. Most enjoyable. Regards // paul

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/4/2019 8:03:00 AM

Hi Silent, exceptional work once again my friend. The love flows from your pen onto the page. This is such a wonderful Sonnet. The emotions flow within my heart as I read your gentle words. A most wonderful fave my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.

Judith S

Date: 2/4/2019 4:28:00 AM

I do love when you write in rhyme! And this poem Is a beautiful depiction of a special relationship with your muse. Another favorite!!

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 2/4/2019 4:15:00 AM

If only my words could render the feelings of pleasure and amazement while reading your stunning poem! I read it over and over! A wonderful poem that satisfies an avid reader's finest aspirations! A masterpiece rich in beauty and meaning.. It touches the depths of my heart and basks into my fave list.. deserving praise and honour. Deepest regards Silent One.