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You'Re the Poem

If only this poetry could define, how your presence takes me towards cloud nine. Your touch brings sensations that feel divine, yet, my tongue is quiet, fighting this muse of mine. Waiting for the moment our lips can greet, your sweet voice takes control of my heartbeat. I sigh hallelujah, as our eyes meet, the taste of your mouth makes my life complete. Suddenly the pen flows like buoyant streams, describing love that's only seen in daydreams. I'm just a star within universal schemes, basking within the passion of your moonbeams. Our love can't be hidden in a metaphor, you're the poem my pen will always adore.
Silent One 3 February 2019
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Horsman Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 10:03 PM
Checking out, one of your oldies, the precious poetry is still there as is the wonderful sentiment.
Somadas Avatar
January 22, 2020 at 2:24 AM
you're the poem my pen will always adore... wow.. so beautiful..
Salehi Avatar
December 30, 2019 at 1:31 AM
Truly a master...
Babcock Avatar
December 22, 2019 at 2:04 PM
A very hot and passionate poem. love phyl
Ochwo-Oburu Avatar
May 26, 2019 at 10:17 AM
I am exactly singing hallelujah I as I read this wonder of a poem. Great, Silent One
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Hello Silent One, Oh my gosh!!! This is a lovely poem that you have created. have a nice evening my friend.
Jeavons Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 1:43 PM
Wow. That was passionate! Good job Silent One. Blessings, Susan
Bohto Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 1:48 PM
Love can' t be hidden inside a (metaphor) a word...picture....that is not easy to conceive from the surface of our gazing eyes..Nice tie into the picture without words to define the meaning behind your minds writing.
Harmony Of The Soul Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Well, hot dang! Steamy and sweet! This is pretty darn good, my friend. (((Hugs)))
Chircop Avatar
February 17, 2019 at 12:51 PM
This has the X Factor..WoWzer :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 16, 2019 at 7:38 PM
Hello silent One, this reads as a love poem to me. A great poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
May Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:39 PM
This is aesthetically done Silent One!!
Smith Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Excellent my friend...
Papyrus Avatar
February 7, 2019 at 5:42 AM
You presented love the way it would choose its own showcase. Salute!
Proxenos Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 12:24 PM
A wonderful love poem, romantic and sensual - a great read Silent One. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 9:10 AM
Love is indeed a fount of inspiration, S-1. Most enjoyable. Regards // paul
Raven Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 8:03 AM
Hi Silent, exceptional work once again my friend. The love flows from your pen onto the page. This is such a wonderful Sonnet. The emotions flow within my heart as I read your gentle words. A most wonderful fave my friend. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
S     Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 4:28 AM
I do love when you write in rhyme! And this poem Is a beautiful depiction of a special relationship with your muse. Another favorite!!
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 4, 2019 at 4:15 AM
If only my words could render the feelings of pleasure and amazement while reading your stunning poem! I read it over and over! A wonderful poem that satisfies an avid reader's finest aspirations! A masterpiece rich in beauty and meaning.. It touches the depths of my heart and basks into my fave list.. deserving praise and honour. Deepest regards Silent One.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 9:49 PM
A lovely sonnet with a perfect ending Silent, : )
Kent Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 7:12 PM
I don't know where you get the ink for your pen but i want some. Great poetry!
May Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Great last line Silent..Very nicely penned
Nicole Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 6:17 PM
And this is how it should be. Love as one. This is so beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 4:18 PM
quite a lovely and romantic sonnet there, Silent One!
Y. Avatar
February 3, 2019 at 2:02 PM
WoW! Silent, This beautiful and romantic at the same time. Great song selection to accompany your well written poem. Excellent job:-) Alexis
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