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You'Re Still Not Here

You’re still not here
after all the years I had stand
You’re still not here,
this loneliness that I do fear.
My footsteps faded on the white sand
whilst the shore wash me away and
you’re still not here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Macfarlane Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 10:00 PM
Well written......congrats on your win.
Freeman Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:59 PM
A let down indeed Celine. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses
Stinson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Hauntingly beautiful. Congratulations on your placing!
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 9:10 AM
Sounds like a real let down. congratulations Celine. Love, Joyce
Quigley Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 8:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Celine
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Celine. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 1:36 PM
A touching write here ...very nice.Congrats Celine on your win.
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Celine. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:53 PM
Congratuylations on your win Celine. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 8:28 PM
Celine, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
Villanueva Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:33 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the big placement here in Dr. Ram's RONDELET contest. . .~~~*-*junjun
Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 5:12 PM
Congrats Celine on a fantastic win in the contest with these exciting words luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 3:54 PM
A nice little tragic one, Celine. Congrats on your win.
Ramsdale Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:29 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
Mehta Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 2:10 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Celine
Mehta Avatar
July 29, 2011 at 1:28 PM
Thanks for the entry, celine
Gorelick Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 9:34 PM
sweet! Sad...made me feel the pain..well done. BG
Dominick Avatar
July 23, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Excellent! Love it! - Best to you, Karen
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