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You're still not here

You’re still not here after all the years I had stand You’re still not here, this loneliness that I do fear. My footsteps faded on the white sand whilst the shore wash me away and you’re still not here.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/1/2011 10:00:00 PM
Well written......congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:59:00 PM
A let down indeed Celine. Congratulations on your first place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:03:00 PM
Hauntingly beautiful. Congratulations on your placing!
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Date: 12/1/2011 9:10:00 AM
Sounds like a real let down. congratulations Celine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Celine
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Celine. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2011 1:36:00 PM
A touching write here ...very nice.Congrats Celine on your win.
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Date: 8/1/2011 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem placing in Dr. Ram Mehta's " Rondelet" contest Celine. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:53:00 PM
Congratuylations on your win Celine. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2011 8:28:00 PM
Celine, great to see your poem honored in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:33:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~smile for the big placement here in Dr. Ram's RONDELET contest. . .~~~*-*junjun
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Celine on a fantastic win in the contest with these exciting words luv..
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Date: 7/31/2011 3:54:00 PM
A nice little tragic one, Celine. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:29:00 PM
A Ronelet Contest Congratulations! Caryl
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Date: 7/31/2011 2:10:00 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Celine
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Date: 7/29/2011 1:28:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, celine
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Date: 7/23/2011 9:34:00 PM
sweet! Sad...made me feel the pain..well done. BG
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Date: 7/23/2011 12:46:00 PM
Excellent! Love it! - Best to you, Karen
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