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Sex pot, you're hot! your flame untame sparks fly mile high hold tight all night More fun? Yes, Hon!!!

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Red Fiery

Date: 5/16/2016 9:16:00 AM

OMG.... Such a passionate write.... Oh lala... I really loved this... Hugs Red..

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/1/2016 1:52:00 PM

I am on fire. Love Eileen. Too hot.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/9/2016 6:10:00 PM

Ooooo... nice! those sparks do fly :) 7 hugs

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/8/2016 6:15:00 AM

Lol! Excellent!

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/7/2016 12:06:00 PM

Not a lot of words, but they convey plenty of descriptiveness. I feel warmer just by reading it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/5/2016 7:12:00 PM

very cute ones, Eileen. He prefers them with titles on each one, but if any of the series type win, this is a sure winner!! By the way, I agree with you. Purple , blue and green top orange for me too, but have you seen Connie's and Timothy Hick's poems on orange? They sure make it sing.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/6/2016 7:48:00 AM

Thanks for the heads up, dear. I'll give them a read when I get back from a baby shower. Thanks for your visit. I've pulled the poem from the contest, so no worries about the rules. Hugs