You'Re Hot

Sex pot,
you're hot!

your flame
untame

sparks fly
mile high

hold tight
all night

More fun?
Yes, Hon!!!

passionfootle

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Red Fiery

May 16, 2016 at 9:16 AM

OMG.... Such a passionate write.... Oh lala... I really loved this... Hugs Red..

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

April 1, 2016 at 1:52 PM

I am on fire. Love Eileen. Too hot.

Eve Roper

March 9, 2016 at 6:10 PM

Ooooo... nice! those sparks do fly :) 7 hugs

Susan Gentry

March 8, 2016 at 6:15 AM

Lol! Excellent!

Robert Pettit

March 7, 2016 at 12:06 PM

Not a lot of words, but they convey plenty of descriptiveness. I feel warmer just by reading it.

Andrea Dietrich

March 5, 2016 at 7:12 PM

very cute ones, Eileen. He prefers them with titles on each one, but if any of the series type win, this is a sure winner!! By the way, I agree with you. Purple , blue and green top orange for me too, but have you seen Connie's and Timothy Hick's poems on orange? They sure make it sing.

Eileen Manassian

March 6, 2016 at 7:48 AM

Thanks for the heads up, dear. I'll give them a read when I get back from a baby shower. Thanks for your visit. I've pulled the poem from the contest, so no worries about the rules. Hugs