Your Visit

I had a dream late last night
I was hugging you and asking
you if you were alright.

Your beautiful hazel eyes were
glowing with the light of spirit
and my heart didn't hurt anymore
with pain, because of your visit
was finished.

I once again held you close and
was remembering about you, what
I missed most. Silence fell upon the
room, your spiritual light lifted the
gloom from the room.

I awoke with tears in my eyes and
I could smell your perfume as if again
I was five.

So much love you gave and never once
did you ever say goodbye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 8/26/2018 9:54:00 AM
A very tender write Sharon, we miss you too. Hopefully life is treating you well, we need more of your poetry. Best Wishes
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 10/5/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry, Always nice to hear from you. Hoping to be back on more often soon. Best Wishes to you and your family as well.
Date: 5/14/2018 12:01:00 AM
Excellent. Very touching and heartfelt write. Thanks for sharing it.
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 5/24/2018 6:17:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Ravi and have a blessed weekend.
Date: 5/9/2018 7:39:00 PM
Heartfelt. A poetic yearning if you will.
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 5/24/2018 6:18:00 AM
Thank you, Richard. Have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 5/7/2018 2:30:00 PM
Very emotionally charged poem, Sharon. It seems if we never get the chance to say goodbye, we carry the emptiness with us longer.
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Sharon Gulley
Date: 5/9/2018 7:11:00 PM
I am okay, I kind of like the fact she never said goodbye, in a sense it makes me feel as though it is not forever, only for a little while, are we apart. Thank you, Daniel, for your sincere comment. Wishing you all the best. Sharon
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