YOUR VERBAL FLAP AINT ALL THAT

You act like you’re all that -
gaining green when you rap,
but I say lines of utter crap
come from your verbal flap.
You lack and I can back that.

My slapjack, whapping facts
would not be rinsed with tact
since odds are a massive stack
of my fly responses so snap
they’ll waste yours to scrap.
You’ll bleed a need for a map
just to sense our distance gap.

I could secure a win wrap
in the deep sleep of a nap
with word whirls of pure blur
punching, crushing your rap,
maiming your able so unstable
it’s incapable to react transact 
any how to track your ego back.

My hit of truth would impact
and sack your rap so abstract
that my heard word redact
would squish lisp yours compact,
then subtract, detract, refract
and ransack precisely exact
the trash you call a talent act.

So, go! Sate-debate my rap trait.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 6:07 AM
Congrats on your win, CayCay. Well done.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:54 AM
Way way Cool Cay Cay! Congrats to that you kep things under Rap. Hugs Rick
Gauthier Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 10:45 PM
What a fun rap, CayCay.Well done. Congrats on your win.
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2018 at 10:28 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your win in the contest with this sweet rhyming poem… Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2018 at 7:49 PM
wow, Caycay, VERY impressive. I think this is more what she wanted than my "feast" but not being a fan of rap, that was the only way I could approach the contest. I fully expect to see THIS gem on the winner list!! thanks for your recent comments. I have 15 left to do and I can start watching tv!! Miss you!
One Avatar
March 19, 2018 at 10:03 AM
This is really good CayCay, you met the challenge really well.. Who would have thought you were a budding Eminem lol
Wigley Avatar
March 18, 2018 at 2:23 AM
Quick firing like Aniie Oakley, CayCay- good luck ! Viv x
Turner Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:47 AM
I think I'll stick with rock-n-roll. Good luck, sweetie! You sent my mind tumbling.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 9:21 PM
These words are like a song. I like the way they snap and slap in my head as I read.
Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Hey, if you got snapped and slapped then my entry for the contest is as I was striving for! Glad to have confirmation from you that I did indeed rhyme battle. Thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Green Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 8:42 PM
That had a catchy in your face rhythm to it. I could hear the bass track as I read this tonight. And that's a fact. :)
Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 12:10 AM
Hey, Chris! Good to see you - hope all is golden in your world. Happy to have your take and my words aren't fake when I thank you for my gratitude's sake! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 2:38 PM
Lively challenge, CayCay! Janice
Godwin Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 12:11 AM
Thank you, Janice - I am delighted to have your comment. All the best ... CayCay
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