Your Touch

Sitting here thinking this through, What happened to me and you? dont want to loose your touch, you have no idea, this hurts so much. I love you more than you'll ever know, the last thing I want is for you to go. Why is this the way it's gotta be? Wish you knew what this is doing to me. We lay side by side, never out of sight. Yet I don't remember the last time you held me tight. Miss the way you look at me, Miss the way it used to be. Look at me, what do you see? Why is it always me who, reaches out for your touch, you're right here and yet I miss you so much. I wish you knew what this is doing to me, what happened to what this used to be?

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Skat A

Date: 4/23/2013 10:34:00 PM

Kylie, Wishing you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself! If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it. HUGS <3 from your newest friend ~*~SKAT"

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2013 9:05:00 AM

Sad poem, I had a relationship like this, were at the end, I was the one reaching over for the affection that died on his part. Your poem truly reminded me of that painful feeling... However it is a good poem, and I will enjoy reading more of your poems. Kylie, "Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"

Kylie Ivey
Date: 4/22/2013 8:05:00 PM

do you have any other ones? I cant even begin to think what I'd write about the sevens wonders or ancient or the new world. I write about things that inspire me, that doesnt work. sorry

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/22/2013 8:30:00 AM

Direct & straightforward from the heart. I condone these kinds of pieces. Well done!

Kim Van Breda

Date: 4/22/2013 7:09:00 AM

Lovely lyrical depiction of a longing heart. Well done xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/22/2013 3:33:00 AM

- A heartbreaking poem .... and very good poem! - Welcome to P-Soup, hope you will have much pleasure in sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - Write, read and give comments. I wish you luck and look forward to read more poems from you in the future. - Take a visit to some of mine, maybe you will find someone you like. - Have a lovely new week in the spring sun. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Tamara Tassell

Date: 4/22/2013 2:39:00 AM

A very touching poem Well written One myself and many others can realate to