Your Touch

Satiny softness surrounds me as your touch ensnares me in ardent, consuming passion for which there is no exultation too much. I desire no respite, escape, dispassion as I am your unrelenting paramour offering a safe harbor for you to moor. Stay with me upon this sea of ecstasy and we shall conceive our lasting legacy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Alhemaidy Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 4:04 PM
Romantic read like a gentle breeze! Have a nice day Linda Flower ~ AA
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 6:56 AM
You are so sweet dear AA. Thank you! hugs from me! :)
Rodgers Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Dear Linda, what a captivating expression of passion and devotion. The imagery of satin softness and ardent passion evokes a sense of intimacy and longing. I love how your words convey a deep connection and commitment, creating a vivid portrayal of love's enduring allure. Linda, this is a stirring ode to the power of touch and the bonds of love. - Blessings, Daniel
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 8:54 AM
Hi dear Daniel. There is a whole science about the meaning and value of the human touch. You are correct in the intent of this poem and I appreciate your thoughtful and expressive comments. :)
Beaufort Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 1:30 PM
Linda....wow. This is serious passion. It's not something everyone has or can even understand. I am of the belief that this happens more as we age and can appreciate our partner. Fun to read and think about.
Fowler Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 8:50 AM
Hey Duke. Yes, passion takes a new turn as we age and interests seem to become deeper and more fulfilling. I'm glad I turned on some reading and thinking... :)
Empress Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 7:54 AM
I absolutely love the way this flows like a beautiful and passionate chorus, amazing use of alliterations and great rhymes and cadence to you beautiful lines, i felt it especially as you wrote “ stay with me upon this sea of ecstasy. Pleasure reading your rispetto. Sending you light always
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 1:16 PM
Many thanks dear Inky. I always appreciate the positivity and light. :)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace