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Your Symphony of Joy

Sing Your Song of Joy 9/19/2023 Of all the great joy that you experience in living, Have no fear of what any human thinks of you! Of any type of poetic music you feel, when truly giving, Worse, be not desirous of praise~it maybe quite untrue. Just be you, a poem need not be an overly decorated cake. Simplicity and truth, are stunning contents, I prefer best. As I sail in peace on a serene, autumnal,aquamarine lake. I read your poems aloud, on my yacht, you are my guests! Being real, far outdoes, being a wordy-poet flake. We exist on earth,not in intergalactic spaces! Real poetry grabs genuine poets, for heavens sake. Better yet, it candlelights your soft, sculptured faces.

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Date: 9/21/2023 1:57:00 AM
Simplicity and truth, two aspects of life we should always admire. Great poem that everyone should read and appreciate. Blessings.
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Date: 9/20/2023 3:13:00 PM
Dear Pangie, this is a truly wonderful poem full of sincerity and very well written too! I love the title and amazing lines, ‘As I sail in peace on a serene, autumnal, aquamarine lake,’ ‘Better yet, it candlelight’s your soft, sculptured faces’. Glorious lines! So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/20/2023 7:20:00 PM
Golly,Christina, you humble me with your gracious comments, You did pick up on my favorite lines in this one, I saw them in my minds eye, very clearly. Thank you for your blessed time! I cherish such touring comments! Thank you for your time! Pangie xxx
Date: 9/20/2023 2:33:00 PM
Pangie--this is such a truthful poem. I, too, appreciate simplicity. I find it less cumbersome and more honest. I took delight in your 'symphony' metaphor. You constructed your poem well...it flows almost effortlessly. Well done!
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Date: 9/20/2023 3:17:00 PM
Sara…I wish I could acknpwledge my poems, far more than I do!I can’t pretend to be The BARD.I am simply, Pangie! Hardly wise, rarely humorous but I promise, always genuine. I need to understand a poem. I love poems of Beaty and truth and the real world. I have no Muse. I either write or deme days choose not to. Your comment really touched because it was stunningly beautiful. Thank you. Pangie xx. Thank you,
Date: 9/20/2023 7:09:00 AM
My very good friend this is a worthy and an exceptionally fine poem. Contains truth in every word, every verse. Takes a fine poet to manage that. A true gem and a fine fav for me. God bless you.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 9/20/2023 10:02:00 AM
Please do share in your influence on me, Robert! Ii care deeply about individuality, truth and life… And…other poets who are incredible here! Poets, like yourself. I know my writing is far from entertaining.))) butI never saw poetry as a way to impress, …just express life ….as I see it. Bless you and Justin and your fine poetry. Thank you, Panagiota xx

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