Vee Bdosa Poet Rhyme

Your Sundress

Vee Bdosa
Contest - THE SUNDRESS


    YOUR SUNDRESS
My fondest wish is but to hold
your sundress creased, so I might fold
it on my arm, and feel the you,
as close I pull your body to

my waiting breast, in love again
with who you are, and who you've been.
Your sundress then, placed with great care,
upon my bedpost; hanging there,

with all the love I have to share.

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Michelle Morris April 3, 2023 at 4:11 PM Well done. Sweet poem. :-)

James Fraser April 9, 2011 at 6:08 AM Congratulation's on your fine win veebdosa in Constance's wonderful contest....:)

Kash Poet April 4, 2011 at 8:02 AM Congrats veebdosa on your win !Enjoyed your poem---kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown April 4, 2011 at 6:52 AM Congratulations on your win Veebdosa in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud April 3, 2011 at 11:54 PM how delicate and realy well- written, vee.. CONGRATS on the greeat win! :) hugggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 3, 2011 at 7:02 PM This is such a romantic & heartfelt write on the sundress-- congrats on your win, Vee :)

Dr.Ram Mehta April 3, 2011 at 6:27 PM Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, veebdosa

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 3, 2011 at 6:11 PM Congrats Vee on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. with this awesome write and entry .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..

Carolyn Devonshire March 27, 2011 at 3:55 PM Oh, that's beautiful, Vee. I don't think I've seen your work before, but I'll be on the lookout for it now. Best wishes, Carolyn

Judy Konos March 27, 2011 at 7:15 AM veebdosa's back!

Dana Smith March 27, 2011 at 7:05 AM Welcome to Premium Membership, Vee! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

Constance La France March 27, 2011 at 6:51 AM Thank you for supporting my contest.

Wiseton Prins March 27, 2011 at 6:34 AM Wow! i try thinking of other words to express my fascination with this poem but always whe i get to the second stanza all through to the last line... its just WOW! really wow!

Nette Onclaud March 27, 2011 at 6:01 AM romantic moments like these leave me breathless, vee.. winning delghts to you! :) huggs, nette