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Vee Bdosa Contest - THE SUNDRESS YOUR SUNDRESS My fondest wish is but to hold your sundress creased, so I might fold it on my arm, and feel the you, as close I pull your body to my waiting breast, in love again with who you are, and who you've been. Your sundress then, placed with great care, upon my bedpost; hanging there, with all the love I have to share.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/3/2023 4:11:00 PM
Well done. Sweet poem. :-)
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Date: 4/9/2011 6:08:00 AM
Congratulation's on your fine win veebdosa in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 4/4/2011 8:02:00 AM
Congrats veebdosa on your win !Enjoyed your poem---kashinath
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Date: 4/4/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Veebdosa in Constance La France's contest "The Sundress". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/3/2011 11:54:00 PM
how delicate and realy well- written, vee.. CONGRATS on the greeat win! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 4/3/2011 7:02:00 PM
This is such a romantic & heartfelt write on the sundress-- congrats on your win, Vee :)
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:27:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, veebdosa
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Date: 4/3/2011 6:11:00 PM
Congrats Vee on your wonderful winning poem in the sundress contest luv.. with this awesome write and entry .. enjoy your top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 3/27/2011 3:55:00 PM
Oh, that's beautiful, Vee. I don't think I've seen your work before, but I'll be on the lookout for it now. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 3/27/2011 7:15:00 AM
veebdosa's back!
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Date: 3/27/2011 7:05:00 AM
Welcome to Premium Membership, Vee! I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:34:00 AM
Wow! i try thinking of other words to express my fascination with this poem but always whe i get to the second stanza all through to the last line... its just WOW! really wow!
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Date: 3/27/2011 6:01:00 AM
romantic moments like these leave me breathless, vee.. winning delghts to you! :) huggs, nette
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