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Your Smell

Getting your smell is an addiction -leaving it is a scarlet pain

Monoku 1 - your best
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Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 2:38 PM

Beautiful monoku. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 11:50 PM

Thank you, Line ...

Barry Stebbings

December 28, 2017 at 1:14 PM

Nicely expressed truth, Probir, Congratulations on your win.

Probir Gupta

December 30, 2017 at 12:14 AM

Thanks, Barry ...

Paul Callus

December 28, 2017 at 9:42 AM

I am sure I commented before on this expressive monoku, Probir, but there's no trace of that! I love how you describe loss, or being separated, away from a special person; creative! Congratulations on your high flying win. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 11:06 AM

It happened so with me too, Paul ... Never mind ... Thank you for liking the poem and the congratulatory message ... Yours one too I enjoyed very much ...

Mike Gentile

December 28, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Congratulations to you as well, I can truly relate to your meaningful poem!!

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 11:06 AM

Thank you so much ...

Eve Roper

December 27, 2017 at 8:47 PM

wonderfully said, Probir, congratulations on your win. hugs eve

Probir Gupta

December 28, 2017 at 4:08 AM

Thank you, Eve ...

James Inman

December 27, 2017 at 12:58 AM

The cost of love Probir, a lovely write.

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:25 AM

Thank you, James ...

Subimal Sinha-Roy

December 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win.

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:25 AM

Thank you ...

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 26, 2017 at 10:28 PM

Powerful pen! Congratulations for your win Probir :) xomo

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:26 AM

Thank you. Maureen ...

Andrea Dietrich

December 26, 2017 at 9:34 PM

I love your imagery and the meaning here. Congrats on a very well deserved win, Probir.

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:27 AM

Thank you, Andrea for liking the Monoku, ...

Judith S

December 26, 2017 at 6:30 PM

Love your monoku Probir!! Congratulations on your top win!!!

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:31 AM

I am honoured ... Thank you, Judith ...

Susan Ashley

December 26, 2017 at 5:10 PM

Congratulations Probir for your well deserved first place win with your deep write. Well done.. ~Susan

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:37 AM

Well, I am glad that you like the one liner ... Just a feeling more suitable for a Urdu Shayeree of which the next line could have been, - a pain that keeps lingering on the ribs for the swan neck ...

Janice Canerdy

December 26, 2017 at 4:14 PM

Dramatically moving, Probir! Congrats. Janice

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:39 AM

Thank you, Janice ... My thoughts when writing the poem are rewarded ...

Charlie Smith

December 26, 2017 at 3:09 PM

Congratulations Probir, well done...

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:40 AM

Thank you, dear friend ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 26, 2017 at 2:59 PM

- Great written, Probir - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:41 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

Silent One

December 26, 2017 at 1:39 PM

Very deep... Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Probir..

Probir Gupta

December 27, 2017 at 4:46 AM

The first place is indeed a surprise given the fact that not a single comment turned up since my posting it ... Indeed sometimes two and two is >four ... Thank you so much for liking the monoku and giving me a slice of seashore ...

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