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Your Smell

Getting your smell is an addiction -leaving it is a scarlet pain Monoku 1 - your best Contest sponsored by Silent One

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:38:00 PM

Beautiful monoku. Congrats on your win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 1/2/2018 11:50:00 PM

Thank you, Line ...

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/28/2017 1:14:00 PM

Nicely expressed truth, Probir, Congratulations on your win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/30/2017 12:14:00 AM

Thanks, Barry ...

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2017 9:42:00 AM

I am sure I commented before on this expressive monoku, Probir, but there's no trace of that! I love how you describe loss, or being separated, away from a special person; creative! Congratulations on your high flying win. Regards // paul

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/28/2017 11:06:00 AM

It happened so with me too, Paul ... Never mind ... Thank you for liking the poem and the congratulatory message ... Yours one too I enjoyed very much ...

Mike Gentile

Date: 12/28/2017 7:49:00 AM

Congratulations to you as well, I can truly relate to your meaningful poem!!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/28/2017 11:06:00 AM

Thank you so much ...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2017 8:47:00 PM

wonderfully said, Probir, congratulations on your win. hugs eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/28/2017 4:08:00 AM

Thank you, Eve ...

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 12:58:00 AM

The cost of love Probir, a lovely write.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:25:00 AM

Thank you, James ...

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 12/27/2017 12:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your great win.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:25:00 AM

Thank you ...

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/26/2017 10:28:00 PM

Powerful pen! Congratulations for your win Probir :) xomo

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:26:00 AM

Thank you. Maureen ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:34:00 PM

I love your imagery and the meaning here. Congrats on a very well deserved win, Probir.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:27:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea for liking the Monoku, ...

Judith S

Date: 12/26/2017 6:30:00 PM

Love your monoku Probir!! Congratulations on your top win!!!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:31:00 AM

I am honoured ... Thank you, Judith ...

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 5:10:00 PM

Congratulations Probir for your well deserved first place win with your deep write. Well done.. ~Susan

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:37:00 AM

Well, I am glad that you like the one liner ... Just a feeling more suitable for a Urdu Shayeree of which the next line could have been, - a pain that keeps lingering on the ribs for the swan neck ...

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2017 4:14:00 PM

Dramatically moving, Probir! Congrats. Janice

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:39:00 AM

Thank you, Janice ... My thoughts when writing the poem are rewarded ...

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/26/2017 3:09:00 PM

Congratulations Probir, well done...

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:40:00 AM

Thank you, dear friend ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:59:00 PM

- Great written, Probir - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:41:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine ...

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 1:39:00 PM

Very deep... Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Probir..

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/27/2017 4:46:00 AM

The first place is indeed a surprise given the fact that not a single comment turned up since my posting it ... Indeed sometimes two and two is >four ... Thank you so much for liking the monoku and giving me a slice of seashore ...