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Your Scent Lingers In Memories and Dreams

"From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" ~ Rumi You're gone, but when a gentle breeze blows my way I sigh, breathing the floral fragrance of your perfume. I remember your smile, and it makes my mind stray to your garden where lavender continues to bloom. Now, darkness looms around me in shades of gray. No longer do I walk among wildflowers in the field, for it would remind me of days I picked you a bouquet, declaring my feelings. With a kiss, our love was sealed. So delicate was your redolence. Velvety soft, like you. Such a tender flower that blossomed but is no more. Now my life is simply something I must muddle through. You were taken from me, and your death, I deplore. Your scent clings to my memory, lingers in my dreams. It will never be washed away, even in torrential rains. At night I cannot bear to see the light of moonbeams. Without you, they fill my heart with bittersweet pains. July 20, 2022 Rhyme Rumi Quote Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet 157 Words

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Date: 8/17/2022 2:00:00 PM
Jenna, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/17/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thank you for the kudos, Constance.
Date: 8/16/2022 4:27:00 AM
Sad one you have written for the contest that hit the front page of the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 8/17/2022 2:04:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Sara.
Date: 8/14/2022 2:20:00 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on this New win. Enjoy your New win with blessings.............
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Date: 8/15/2022 6:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Date: 8/12/2022 9:54:00 PM
Yay! More accolades for you Jenna and my favorite poem. Congratulations my friend on your deserving First Placement! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/13/2022 3:32:00 AM
I'm so very pleased by your reaction and wonderful comments, Connie. Thanks for the return visit.
Date: 7/25/2022 8:23:00 AM
Great choice to be POTD Jenna, such superb rhyme and flow along with superb insightfulness. Congrats! Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 7/25/2022 8:52:00 AM
Thank you for the kind remarks, Gordon. I'm grateful for your visit and thoughts.
Date: 7/24/2022 11:30:00 PM
A very moving and beautiful poem Jenna. It is sure to do well in the contest. I am Faving it! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/25/2022 8:51:00 AM
Hi Connie. I am so very grateful for the congratulations and for you faving it. Thank you so sincerely.
Date: 7/24/2022 3:35:00 AM
Jenna a touching write of a special person. I am sorry I missed this wonderful Poetry of yours. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. Your writing talent shines in this heartfelt write. God bless you Dear...
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Date: 7/25/2022 8:50:00 AM
You haven't missed it after all, Michael. Thank you for the congratulations and compliments.
Date: 7/23/2022 7:12:00 AM
Jenna, beautiful poem and emotions, best of luck in the contest and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 7/23/2022 8:33:00 AM
I'm appreciative of your well wishes, Constance. Thanks so very much.
Date: 7/22/2022 3:28:00 PM
Wonderful write Jenna, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:37:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph.
Date: 7/22/2022 2:28:00 PM
Beautifully written and a lovely tribute. Congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:36:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it, Jeanette. Thank you.
Date: 7/22/2022 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! A lovely write!
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:36:00 PM
Thank you very sincerely, Kim.
Date: 7/22/2022 12:13:00 PM
Hi Jenna, such beauty can be found in the heart of sadness and your excellent poetry is a testament to this. Congratulations on this piece being honoured as Poem Of the Day, it is well worth the honour. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:36:00 PM
Hi Mike, and thanks so very much for your congrats and kind thoughts.
Date: 7/22/2022 11:51:00 AM
Melancholy strands of beautiful passion you have woven dear Jenna. A sad poem that is equally lovely in the depth of emotion you have given it . Congratulations on POTD! Hugs to you and best of luck in the contest . Blessings, Susan :)
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Date: 7/22/2022 3:35:00 PM
Your gracious comments are very encouraging, Susan. Thank you.
Date: 7/22/2022 10:59:00 AM
My mother-in-law often expresses her sadness that her wonderful husband is not with her to share the joys of a private joke or the great-grandchildren achieving new milestones. Kudos to you for this wistful ode to a lost love and the scents that remind one of all that is missed. Love the word 'redolence' along with all your floral imagery. Congrats on your POTD, my friend. I just sent you a soupmail ~ John
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Date: 7/22/2022 11:33:00 AM
It is a wistful look at missing those we loved, so often brought on by a scent. Thank you so much for your thoughts, and for the many wonderful comments in your soup mail. I was humbled and honored by them, John. I have replied.
Date: 7/22/2022 10:53:00 AM
Bitter mingled with the sweet in a pensive walk through the treasures of your memories Jenna. Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 7/22/2022 11:30:00 AM
We have to take the bitter with the sweet, don't we? Thanks so very much, Sam.
Date: 7/22/2022 10:34:00 AM
I hope those fragrant memories continue, Jenna. Great pick for POTD.
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Date: 7/22/2022 11:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jim.
Date: 7/22/2022 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations my friend!! You have spilled some amazing ink with this sad but beautiful work of art! Well done!!!
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:59:00 AM
Hi Mark. It's so good to see you here. You've been missed. Thank you for leaving me your welcomed comments.
Date: 7/22/2022 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful/sad/powerful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a very blessed day..............
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:58:00 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Paula. Thanks.
Date: 7/22/2022 9:26:00 AM
Congrats, Jenna, on your tender, touching poem as POTD. Happy Weekend! :) gw
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:58:00 AM
Thank you so much, GW. Good weekend greetings to you, too.
Date: 7/22/2022 9:12:00 AM
Congrats on a lovely, poignant poem and POTD honors, Jenna.
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your congrats, Jeff.
Date: 7/22/2022 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! You have awakened the Rumi love poems that I have enjoyed….beautiful and good luck in the contest~surely a winner! :)Paulette
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/22/2022 9:57:00 AM
Hi Paulette, and thanks so very much for your well wishes. We shall see about the winning part.
Date: 7/22/2022 8:53:00 AM
Congratulations, my friend! I knew this one was truly exceptional, so it doesn't surprise me that it has been named a P.O.T.D.! Enjoy all of your kudos and keep writing the kind of poetry you are becoming well known for. I am so proud of you!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/22/2022 9:56:00 AM
Thank you ever so much for the encouragement you always give me, Milt. I'm grateful for every review you offer. Proud of me? You made me smile ;)
Date: 7/22/2022 8:05:00 AM
Sad but very beautiful. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 7/22/2022 9:54:00 AM
Thanks a lot, Ann.
Date: 7/22/2022 7:42:00 AM
I have several books written by Rumi, but his love poems are the most cherished writings. Your poem touches that part of me that resonates with all things loving. Beautifully expressed love and the rememberance of it's beginnings. Congratulations on your honor of POTD my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/22/2022 7:53:00 AM
Another uplifting commentary and another smile. Thank you, Bill. I am grateful for both.
Date: 7/22/2022 7:19:00 AM
So touching and emotional write on the separation and those memories of your loved one dear Jenna.... Congratulations on your POTD honor... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Jenna Logan
Date: 7/22/2022 7:20:00 AM
Hi Ani and thank you for such a charming review.
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