Your Scent Lingers In Memories and Dreams

"From deep within my heart I always catch the scent of my Beloved. How can I help but follow that fragrance?" ~ Rumi You're gone, but when a gentle breeze blows my way I sigh, breathing the floral fragrance of your perfume. I remember your smile, and it makes my mind stray to your garden where lavender continues to bloom. Now, darkness looms around me in shades of gray. No longer do I walk among wildflowers in the field, for it would remind me of days I picked you a bouquet, declaring my feelings. With a kiss, our love was sealed. So delicate was your redolence. Velvety soft, like you. Such a tender flower that blossomed but is no more. Now my life is simply something I must muddle through. You were taken from me, and your death, I deplore. Your scent clings to my memory, lingers in my dreams. It will never be washed away, even in torrential rains. At night I cannot bear to see the light of moonbeams. Without you, they fill my heart with bittersweet pains. July 20, 2022 Rhyme Rumi Quote Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet 157 Words
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La France Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:00 PM
Jenna, beautifully penned and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
Logan Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Thank you for the kudos, Constance.
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 4:27 AM
Sad one you have written for the contest that hit the front page of the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
Logan Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 2:04 PM
Thanks a lot, Sara.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 2:20 PM
Back with "Congratulations" on this New win. Enjoy your New win with blessings.............
Logan Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 6:07 AM
Thanks so much, Paula.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 9:54 PM
Yay! More accolades for you Jenna and my favorite poem. Congratulations my friend on your deserving First Placement! Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 3:32 AM
I'm so very pleased by your reaction and wonderful comments, Connie. Thanks for the return visit.
Mcconnell Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 8:23 AM
Great choice to be POTD Jenna, such superb rhyme and flow along with superb insightfulness. Congrats! Blessings, Gordon
Logan Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 8:52 AM
Thank you for the kind remarks, Gordon. I'm grateful for your visit and thoughts.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 11:30 PM
A very moving and beautiful poem Jenna. It is sure to do well in the contest. I am Faving it! Congratulations on having it honored for POTD. Blessings xxoo
Logan Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Hi Connie. I am so very grateful for the congratulations and for you faving it. Thank you so sincerely.
Tor Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 3:35 AM
Jenna a touching write of a special person. I am sorry I missed this wonderful Poetry of yours. Congratulations on a well deserved POTD. Your writing talent shines in this heartfelt write. God bless you Dear...
Logan Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 8:50 AM
You haven't missed it after all, Michael. Thank you for the congratulations and compliments.
La France Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 7:12 AM
Jenna, beautiful poem and emotions, best of luck in the contest and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings ~ Constance
Logan Avatar
July 23, 2022 at 8:33 AM
I'm appreciative of your well wishes, Constance. Thanks so very much.
May Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:28 PM
Wonderful write Jenna, Congrats on POTD
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:37 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph.
Meadows Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Beautifully written and a lovely tribute. Congratulations on your POTD.
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:36 PM
I'm glad you liked it, Jeanette. Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 2:16 PM
Congratulations on POTD! A lovely write!
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Thank you very sincerely, Kim.
Raven Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 12:13 PM
Hi Jenna, such beauty can be found in the heart of sadness and your excellent poetry is a testament to this. Congratulations on this piece being honoured as Poem Of the Day, it is well worth the honour. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:36 PM
Hi Mike, and thanks so very much for your congrats and kind thoughts.
Lawrence Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Melancholy strands of beautiful passion you have woven dear Jenna. A sad poem that is equally lovely in the depth of emotion you have given it . Congratulations on POTD! Hugs to you and best of luck in the contest . Blessings, Susan :)
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 3:35 PM
Your gracious comments are very encouraging, Susan. Thank you.
Watt Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:59 AM
My mother-in-law often expresses her sadness that her wonderful husband is not with her to share the joys of a private joke or the great-grandchildren achieving new milestones. Kudos to you for this wistful ode to a lost love and the scents that remind one of all that is missed. Love the word 'redolence' along with all your floral imagery. Congrats on your POTD, my friend. I just sent you a soupmail ~ John
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:33 AM
It is a wistful look at missing those we loved, so often brought on by a scent. Thank you so much for your thoughts, and for the many wonderful comments in your soup mail. I was humbled and honored by them, John. I have replied.
Kauffman Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Bitter mingled with the sweet in a pensive walk through the treasures of your memories Jenna. Congratulations on your POTD!
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:30 AM
We have to take the bitter with the sweet, don't we? Thanks so very much, Sam.
Slaughter Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:34 AM
I hope those fragrant memories continue, Jenna. Great pick for POTD.
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:30 AM
Thank you very much, Jim.
Koplin Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:35 AM
Congratulations my friend!! You have spilled some amazing ink with this sad but beautiful work of art! Well done!!!
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Hi Mark. It's so good to see you here. You've been missed. Thank you for leaving me your welcomed comments.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful/sad/powerful write. I really enjoyed it. Have a very blessed day..............
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:58 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, Paula. Thanks.
Wolf Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Congrats, Jenna, on your tender, touching poem as POTD. Happy Weekend! :) gw
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thank you so much, GW. Good weekend greetings to you, too.
Kyser Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:12 AM
Congrats on a lovely, poignant poem and POTD honors, Jenna.
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Thank you so very much for your congrats, Jeff.
Calasibetta Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! You have awakened the Rumi love poems that I have enjoyed….beautiful and good luck in the contest~surely a winner! :)Paulette
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:57 AM
Hi Paulette, and thanks so very much for your well wishes. We shall see about the winning part.
Hankins Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations, my friend! I knew this one was truly exceptional, so it doesn't surprise me that it has been named a P.O.T.D.! Enjoy all of your kudos and keep writing the kind of poetry you are becoming well known for. I am so proud of you!
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Thank you ever so much for the encouragement you always give me, Milt. I'm grateful for every review you offer. Proud of me? You made me smile ;)
Peck Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 8:05 AM
Sad but very beautiful. Congratulations on POTD!
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:54 AM
Thanks a lot, Ann.
Baker Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 7:42 AM
I have several books written by Rumi, but his love poems are the most cherished writings. Your poem touches that part of me that resonates with all things loving. Beautifully expressed love and the rememberance of it's beginnings. Congratulations on your honor of POTD my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Another uplifting commentary and another smile. Thank you, Bill. I am grateful for both.
Jayasankar Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 7:19 AM
So touching and emotional write on the separation and those memories of your loved one dear Jenna.... Congratulations on your POTD honor... Hugs... ~ Ani
Logan Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Hi Ani and thank you for such a charming review.
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