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Your Proposal

your proposal caught me by surprise a rapid disposal easy to surmise a sealed envelope fancily letterized with only my name on the out side with no way to avoid the tearing the seal i removed the letter while you were starring and still and read the content the moment well spent giving emotions to feelings rarely lent emotions are things in which we have no control but you handled my emotion quite well being so bold a poem well written from deep in the heart my emotions were smitten what to say i don't know where to start so i'll just wrap my arms around you and hold you real tight let this be my love with all my might try not to smother or put out the light but hold you in my arms until my love comes in sight i'll make you part of me where love only grows a part of me that no matter what you can come and hold because that's what your proposal did when it wrapped around my heart it gave my life new meaning and a brand new start

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/24/2009 2:20:00 PM
Honest open feelings revealed in this write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 2/23/2009 8:25:00 AM
Dear John: A really beautiful, poem filled with such love from your heart. Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 2/12/2009 7:03:00 PM
John, thanks for sharing this lovely poem. It's so timely as Valentine's Day approaches. Good job! Carolyn
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Date: 2/11/2009 2:06:00 PM
This is beautiful, John. Perfect for the coming Valentine's Day. Very tender and sweetly writen it is a wonderful start. Thank you for your lovely comment. It helped lift my spirits. Awesome write, John. Love, Robin
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Date: 2/11/2009 11:54:00 AM
This is lovely! It speaks well of love and emotion, proposing that love last, be started and always have a future. Very well written. Michael
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:22:00 PM
Nice work John and great thoughts penned here...Raul
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Date: 2/10/2009 2:39:00 PM
This love is so welcomed and so appreciated. Honest and tender your feelings revealed. A lovely hopeful beginning. May it grow and last forever. Very sweet. Love, Shar
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