Your Primal Essence

The things of the heart,
The mind didn’t start!
The mind blows,
The heart knows,
The prime directive,
Which is very effective!

The mind’s reflection,
Lacks perfection!
End this siege,
Restore love’s breach!
Give Love’s command,
A chance in your life,,, to stand!

Know by serpent strife,
There is no life!
So clear heaven’s fallopian,
Life’s doorway opening!
Now with a holy glow,
Seeds of life’s light will flow!

Wow! With a great wonder,
The elder will serve the younger!
Reflections of strife,
Will be replaced, by river of life!

Would you have a notion,
How a river can flow from the ocean!
By it’s prime directive,
Being ever so effective!
The precipitation, has a relation,
With the heat, the air, the sun, the moon,
For life’s love in action is not a goon!

For the love that you are,
Is a knowledgeable heir,
And inside your heart,
Love already knows,
As your mind blows!

Your heart already knows,
What your life thru your mind,,, is yet to learn!

Therefore churn,,,, your learning,
Inside your actually fire’s burning,
For it will greatly improve,
You, inside love’s grove,
Your discerning,
Concerning,
Your life!

3-1-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/29/2012 8:45:00 AM
congrats on your featured poem of the week
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Date: 3/28/2012 5:54:00 PM
Congrats Moses on the featuring of your spiritual write, "Your Primal Essence."
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Date: 3/28/2012 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your premium featured write this week Moses. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/26/2012 8:17:00 PM
congrats Moses on featured poem on PS this week luv.. always amazing luv..
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Date: 3/26/2012 8:47:00 AM
Really nice piece of work, very much enjoyed, thankyou.
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Date: 3/26/2012 6:41:00 AM
Wonderful poem and congrats on feature.......Patrick
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Date: 1/9/2010 11:39:00 AM
Another of your very uplifting writes here Moses. So filled with His Truth! Profound message conveyed! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Many thanks too for your always kind comments and your words of encouragement are deeply appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary
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Date: 8/3/2009 12:32:00 AM
Like this pacy write John.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 7/21/2009 12:20:00 PM
Dude, your crisp lingo is everlasting.... I call myself Asavvy1.. I may have compitition.... EXCELLENT write as always dear friend......:JP)
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Date: 7/4/2009 11:45:00 PM
it's interesting for me how you come at the absolute truth from such a different angle than I'm used to, one more tied to the old/new testaments, by my guess as you mention the serpent here. from your blog I have no doubt you know exactly what the truth is, I'm just the younger looking for the elder. I wouldn't really know what to say if I did find him though.
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Date: 7/2/2009 11:01:00 AM
Aha another rhymster. Very nice. I will look for your poems. Thanks for your comment on my "Cropuching Tiger". No not mine. He was sadly in the news. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/1/2009 6:44:00 PM
John, Your poems are deep and filled with God's love. I'm enjoying reading your work. Keep writing.
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Date: 7/1/2009 1:55:00 PM
sounds like a good rap! Light & Love
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Date: 7/1/2009 1:48:00 PM
your rhyming is appealing.........!
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