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Once You gave it, it is ours Nothing can ever take it away Whether it is an attribute A quality, a state, a phenomenon All are given without retracting They are Your choices Endow to Your admirers Gift from above Only You determine When, what, and why We can never guess You It will never go away With life’s occurrences Divine, wonderment, rarity Your present Yours

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/13/2012 7:03:00 PM
An eternal seal! Very nice description of how a spiritual gift cannot be returned! Enjoyed...gwendolen
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Date: 8/10/2012 10:18:00 AM
I am stopping by your list of poetry to read a poem and thank you for your kind comment on my poetry Toquyen. It is a pleasure to read your writing. Hope you are enjoying this beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/11/2012 10:37:00 PM
Thanks, Carol. I am glad you like it. Hope you are too. Love ya, Toquyen
Date: 8/7/2012 2:06:00 PM
Very wise writing here. I like it. Thanks for sharing and thanks for the visit at my little house. Lucilla
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/7/2012 5:56:00 PM
Thanks, Lucilla. You are so kind. Love your little house. Love ya, Toquyen
Date: 8/7/2012 9:52:00 AM
so sweet Toyquen,lovely
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/7/2012 5:55:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. I am glad you like it. Love ya, Toquyen
Date: 8/7/2012 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful written Toquyen. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/7/2012 5:54:00 PM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. I love your comment. Love ya, Toquyen
Date: 8/6/2012 11:51:00 PM
nice work
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Toquyen Harrell
Date: 8/7/2012 5:54:00 PM
Thanks, Kenisha. Love, Toquyen

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