Jhondal Hillls Poet ABC

Your poem

A poem for you
In hope my feelings could come through 
A poem where sky would not be blue 
But filled with you 

While knowing I am grey to you 
Wishing I could grow a lotus for no matter how 
tiny bit of a seed it is 
While you have put on emotions of budhha
Making your poem  stiffed with cold 
From the winter that has it's origin from you 
Is this poem bound  for desolation

a failed voyage for me that is adrift 
"By the raging storm of my feelings"

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M. A. Ceilidh May 13, 2024 at 8:53 PM stunning painting of words from a stunning soul

Beata Agustin May 7, 2024 at 8:48 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. (Please check ABC as poetry form.)

Jhondal Hillls May 5, 2024 at 1:09 PM This is my first poem, so if you could give some feedback, it will be much appreciated