Your My Morning Song

Your eyes flame of fascination 
and I feel unworthy to be looked upon
by a goddess.  Then your lips twirl as your voice 
begins to play “Good Morning.” A beloved song, always  composing 
a smile to my mornings and reminding me that I’m truly blessed.  
After the record fades we lay comfortably in its evanescence.
Awaiting nothing, simply lost in the presence of love.  My fingers leisurely 
trace tender curves and turns of God’s greatest works as your warmth welcomes
me closer.  Your hands blindly search for mine and the fissures are filled as our hands 
fasten. Then your voice begins to play, “I Love You” and I repeat trying my best to
stay in tune.  We whisper acapella as our bodies begin to compose a beat through passion.
A tenor soprano duo at its best. You’re my favorite song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Jenkins Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 1:20 PM
beautiful, reads wonderfully.
Burton Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 12:29 PM
wow! this is great and read so smoothly. Really enjoyed the end as well. Thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Enjoy your day.
Moreno Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Excellent work James, the last two lines were awesome...Raul
Shango Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 10:41 AM
Love in the metaphoric form of music. Beautiful -one love my friend
Bird Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 9:59 AM
This mad, deeply, emotional, love stirring goodness! What a beauty I find here today on the soup! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem escape, glad you found the time to stop by and leave word. Much appreciated.
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:20 AM
Agreeing with Christie Moses -->Goin' 2 Ma favz:)
Higgins Avatar
June 12, 2009 at 8:04 AM
We whisper acapella as our bodies begin to compose a beat through passion....Jmaes that line is the entire poem...wow..love this.
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