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Your My Morning Song

Your eyes flame of fascination and I feel unworthy to be looked upon by a goddess. Then your lips twirl as your voice begins to play “Good Morning.” A beloved song, always composing a smile to my mornings and reminding me that I’m truly blessed. After the record fades we lay comfortably in its evanescence. Awaiting nothing, simply lost in the presence of love. My fingers leisurely trace tender curves and turns of God’s greatest works as your warmth welcomes me closer. Your hands blindly search for mine and the fissures are filled as our hands fasten. Then your voice begins to play, “I Love You” and I repeat trying my best to stay in tune. We whisper acapella as our bodies begin to compose a beat through passion. A tenor soprano duo at its best. You’re my favorite song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2009 1:20:00 PM
beautiful, reads wonderfully.
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Date: 6/12/2009 12:29:00 PM
wow! this is great and read so smoothly. Really enjoyed the end as well. Thank you for your comments on my poetry as well. Enjoy your day.
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Date: 6/12/2009 10:58:00 AM
Excellent work James, the last two lines were awesome...Raul
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Date: 6/12/2009 10:41:00 AM
Love in the metaphoric form of music. Beautiful -one love my friend
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Date: 6/12/2009 9:59:00 AM
This mad, deeply, emotional, love stirring goodness! What a beauty I find here today on the soup! Thank you for your kind comment on my poem escape, glad you found the time to stop by and leave word. Much appreciated.
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:20:00 AM
Agreeing with Christie Moses -->Goin' 2 Ma favz:)
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Date: 6/12/2009 8:04:00 AM
We whisper acapella as our bodies begin to compose a beat through passion....Jmaes that line is the entire poem...wow..love this.
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