Your Lips An

Your lips an endless garden, 

I would  love to roam

Roam in search of its sweetest fruits.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 6, 2011 at 9:31 AM
With relatively few words, you have conveyed a nice message. However, in your second line, only one "would" appears sufficient.
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