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Your Lady's Dress

Your lady's dress, so red and oh so fine. I hear whispers in the wind, oh how they are so divine. I see your lady's footprints, they're indented in the sand. As you whisper softly, I watch you take her hand. Her eyes tell a story, oh how yours turn the page. Loving nights forever, as both of you grow with age. Your lady's dress, oh so white and how divine. Fresh rose petals falling as you pour her sweet wine. A gold diamond ring, it holds her close to you. As words are exchanged, I hear both of you say "I do". Your lady's dress, so wrinkled and so perfumed. Knitting needles on the bedside, she’s falling asleep real soon. I hear soft whispers of love and then age consumes. How another winters past, now death is soon to bloom. July 2, 2018

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Date: 7/8/2018 9:02:00 PM
Love the romantic imagery you have created with your pen. Rebecca. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Rebecca Ruth Shong
Date: 7/9/2018 5:27:00 AM
Hugs to you!
Date: 7/7/2018 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great imagery. Enjoyed this.
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Date: 7/7/2018 7:36:00 AM
Welcome, Rebecca, and congrats on your top win.
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Rebecca Ruth Shong
Date: 7/9/2018 5:27:00 AM
Thank you so very much! How do I know I won?
Date: 7/2/2018 3:38:00 PM
Hi Rebecca.. Welcome to Poetry Soup! You're going to love it here. Read and comment on others poets writes and they will do the same for you. Take a minute to come check out my latest write. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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