Your Inviting Look : Heads

Foggy morning gloomy noon ticking clock no work. Your look top to bottom inviting turning on. Will trip on my wing from brow to your lip. Climb mount go bottom bow to your crowning glory ================
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 1/31/2012 11:23:00 PM
Ah, kash the romantic was definitely here-- I really enjoyed reading this one and enjoyed the short lines-- so much said in these sensual lines that flowed really well! Super congrats to you!!
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:43:00 PM
Kash-I told you she'd like it! It is very good and I'm glad you won!
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Date: 1/31/2012 5:00:00 PM
Wow, good for you Kash!!! This is terrific....and does not seem contrived at all. Not an easy task! As for me, and even with your help....I continue to screw up!! I wouldn't be surprised if you think I am the most messed up poet on the soup...!! I spotted a sneaky "e" as soon as the contest closed!! (maybe there are even more, but I'm afraid to look!! Ha ha..! Congrats to you, and thanks for trying to help a helpless creature !! :)
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Date: 1/31/2012 1:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 10:54:00 AM
Good one Kash like it, congratulations x
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Date: 1/10/2012 2:25:00 AM
Perfect! Very nice.
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Date: 12/17/2011 10:44:00 AM
Wow! I can't even begin to write with these restrictions, but you have created a spiritual masterpiece, Kash. I'm sure this will be a winner. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/17/2011 9:21:00 AM
Kash, You tube the song Smooth Operator by Sade. It is amazing.Hopefully you won't find a cheesy video. Let me know if you like jazz...;) I was laughing bc I wasn't sure u have ever heard of this song that goes back to the days that I was just learning how to drive a car. Ah,...the memories. Have a wonderful weekend, friend.
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Date: 12/17/2011 4:30:00 AM
ohhh, i like the flow and essence of this one, kashi buddy.. a winner for me, whoo.. come visit my " burst of petals; i need your thoughts on this one.. ;) huggs, champ!
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Date: 12/17/2011 12:25:00 AM
You could move to America and start doing butter commercials...u are one smooth operator, poet!!! Butter reference is to Fabio. Gwendolen
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Date: 12/16/2011 8:44:00 PM
Just reading your comments here. Yes, I agree with Natalie, I think Nikko will like this. SUre hope so! Have a great weekend. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/16/2011 8:38:00 AM
Excellent Kash. Thanks for pullinng me up on my entry, and for taking the time to read them and comment .x
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Date: 12/16/2011 6:03:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Kash. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I am going to see if I can write something for a couple contests this weekend. Hope you find the inspiration to do the same. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2011 5:12:00 AM
it just keeps getting better. reading your poems. Kash. harry. good luck.
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:32:00 PM
Kash-Fine work here-I think Nikko will really like it. Good luck to you :)
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Date: 12/15/2011 9:21:00 PM
Getting sensuous again without your e's and a's this time! Gosh, you did pretty well with this one, Kash. Sure to be in the winners' circle. As for mine, I just chose Jimmy because it was one of the few two syllable boy names that fit. haha.
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:54:00 AM
whooo, what makes you tringle these days, kashi??.. love this!.. check my 2 new ones.. i'm back, thanks to you!! :) hugggs!
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Date: 12/15/2011 11:55:00 AM
*tingle*
Date: 12/15/2011 11:53:00 AM
Kash a simmering start ending in a great crescendo, best of luck, have a great holiday..David
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:32:00 AM
Wink,wink;)
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