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Your Gold Hair Hung Just Right On Your Shoulders

Your Gold Hair Hung Just Right On Your Shoulders You enticed bright moonlight to shine brighter upon your bare shoulders beaming so white. I dreamed of love and held you much tighter memory forever held in my sight. Your gold hair hung just right on your shoulders soft twinkles graced deeply your blue, blue eyes. My racing heart screamed, " you be much bolder" you have enough help from summer skies! You felt my quickened and hotter breathing with gentle touch you said, its alright. This day, Fate decided you are leaving I fight back welling tears with all my might. Your passing, sent my lost world down crashing. Our love, our time, my heart keeps rehashing. Robert J. Lindley, 1-03-2017 Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Words: 108

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Date: 1/4/2017 4:06:00 PM
Beautiful, sad and deeply touching, Robert. Your muse has started the new year on a high! Full marks to you. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/4/2017 9:03:00 AM
Yep, that gold hair will do it every time, Robert. Another wonderful sonnet, Robert:)
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Date: 1/4/2017 8:17:00 AM
Such a sad one, but also beautiful, Robert. Write on, dear Sonneteer!!
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Date: 1/4/2017 5:52:00 AM
A sonnet of superb poetic quality dear Robert! Excellent and a seven!
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Date: 1/3/2017 10:03:00 PM
A wonderful sonnet, Robert! Pulls on the heart strings this one.
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Date: 1/3/2017 9:56:00 PM
Ok. *tear* I can't say anything else. :) Vey touching sonnet...big hugs...deb
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