Kash Poet Poet Tanka

Your Forget-Me-Not Smile

building a nest now
with your forget-me-not smile
dream bird of my mind
flying too close to you now
to capture those rainbow smiles

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Contest:Tanka the Pivot

Date:22nd October 2012

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Sara Kendrick November 3, 2012 at 7:24 AM Ahhh!!So romantic and expressive ...Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your presence at my work is always appreciated..Sara

Phyllis Babcock October 27, 2012 at 2:22 PM Nice way to think of the person you love with forget me not smiles. Lovely poem Kash. love phyl

Lucilla Carrillo October 26, 2012 at 8:32 AM Very beautiful. I like it Your forget me not smile. Thanks for sharing. I went to the woods and found a rock, with three little words. Forget me not. Many blessings, Lucilla

Connie Marcum Wong October 26, 2012 at 3:47 AM A superb entry for the contest Kash. I am sure it will do well. Mahalo for your help. Blessings

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 25, 2012 at 4:48 PM AGAIN A FABULOUS EXPRESSION OF EMOTION KASH WITH AN AMAZING PIVOT LINE .. WINNING WISHES TO U ALWAYS ..

Debbie Guzzi October 25, 2012 at 12:43 PM trying to figure Joy's rules out have contacted her yes I will start! HUGS L & L ma

Vesna Kovrlija October 25, 2012 at 12:20 PM I really love this poem, Kash.

Debbie Guzzi October 25, 2012 at 11:56 AM Please be 1 of my five in the present giving Xmas contest Joy is running? Let me know if you can? Light & Love

Nette Onclaud October 25, 2012 at 9:26 AM yoohoo... anything new form your magical quill?.. :) huggs!

Nette Onclaud October 24, 2012 at 9:28 AM you are a romantic, kashi... wow, this is defining in flow and content..:) hugggs a lot, bud!

Dinda Minardi October 24, 2012 at 9:14 AM Awww, this is just too sweet!!!

Harry Horsman October 23, 2012 at 3:26 PM like this Kash, awesome poem, and love the title...

Debbie Guzzi October 23, 2012 at 2:18 PM well..there are all kinds of birds aye? and nests..Light & Love Kash Poet October 23, 2012 at 8:42 PM And all kind of smiles also........

Elizabeth Wesley October 23, 2012 at 1:19 PM Like a wing in flight is this verse Kash, wonderful entry for the contest!

Cynthia Alvez October 23, 2012 at 11:02 AM Beautiful and a great entry! Your words are treasures here..."building a nest with your forget-me-not smile...". How wonderful to think of someone in such an endearing way. Ahh! Cynthia

Len Gasun October 23, 2012 at 8:13 AM This is great and so lovely poem, Kash. This is a winner for me! Good luck always! hugs:) Leonora

S.Jagathsimhan Nair October 23, 2012 at 8:10 AM Beautiful write, Kash, very nice!!jag

Mohammad Yamin October 23, 2012 at 7:31 AM An enchanting Tanka with elegant use of metaphors. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my Tanka Unexhausted Love. -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2012 at 7:14 AM Kash, ENTER it. Suzette told me in FB that even though she has left Soup, she plans to judge her contest!

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday October 22, 2012 at 10:57 PM I'm discovering the charms of tanka with Debbie Guzzi right now and this one of yours will definitely convince me to use it! So sweet! Thanks a lot!:) Hanitra

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2012 at 9:59 PM sad and beautiful, Kashinath. Is it for one of the contests? let me check out that thing you told me in soupmail now!

Audrey Haick October 22, 2012 at 9:30 PM A smile to remember is always a sure way to say, 'Forget me not'! Beautiful little Rhyme, Kash. Hope you're well. Annalise

Russell Sivey October 22, 2012 at 4:03 PM This is beautiful my friend, quite the gorgeous write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful poem this afternoon! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2012 at 3:56 PM :-( Kash, It is one of them days...I can't seem to find the rainbow smiles.... always...pd

Anne-Lise Andresen October 22, 2012 at 3:13 PM Amazing written - deep thoughts between the lines Kash. - - - ( "king of Haiku" can you be so kind and read mine - I am in the learning stage :) oxox / / Anne-Lise :)