Your Eyes Make Me Realize

I love your eyes. They really tantalize. I can see right through your disguise. It's so easy to surmise I come to realize, you are a prize; because you have beautiful eyes. Inspired by another member's poem
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Macfarlane Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 12:50 PM
They say the eyes are windows to the soul....a terrific monorhyme Robert. Hugs
Manassian Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 7:41 AM
Wow!!!! Make that monorhyme work for ya. Beautiful...
Sivey Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 12:36 AM
You have captured the beauty of someones eyes within this illustrious write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a superior piece, Great Work!!
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