Your Eyes

Looking into your eyes
I blushed, I turned away
I thought I had invaded your privacy
As though I was inside your body
I saw you naked, fully clothed
I saw past the facade, I was inside
It was beautiful, architecturally sound
The inner beauty was breathtaking
I hope you will invite me back

~Rick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 1, 2011 at 12:55 AM
Wonderful as always, Rick.
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May 12, 2011 at 10:33 PM
Inticing, yet sadly aluring...Loved it!!
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