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Your Eyes

Looking into your eyes I blushed, I turned away I thought I had invaded your privacy As though I was inside your body I saw you naked, fully clothed I saw past the facade, I was inside It was beautiful, architecturally sound The inner beauty was breathtaking I hope you will invite me back ~Rick

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 12:55:00 AM
Wonderful as always, Rick.
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:33:00 PM
Inticing, yet sadly aluring...Loved it!!
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