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The following poem is hardly a true haiku.  Yes, it has three lines and follows the proper syllable count and is very simplistic but lacks imagery like I believe the Japanese intended.

I would call this psyku, a pseudo haiku poem. Humerous, mabe even slightly witty, but pants are not image-filled writing.

Other forms of haiku are cinqku, dodoitsu, epulaeryu, monoku, senryu, and questionku. There maybe even more.

 

 

What? You don't hear me? Well, try pulling down your pants! So, you can hear me.

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Date: 6/9/2024 4:05:00 PM
Oh... and your title is sooo clever!
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Date: 6/9/2024 4:02:00 PM
Omg that's funny... since you begin with the question..."what?" Does that mean you are the one who cannot hear due to over abundance of trousers??
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Date: 6/2/2024 9:30:00 AM
Lol.. should do a contest on this
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Date: 5/30/2024 7:51:00 PM
it's quite apparent you require disciplined disciplining.
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