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Your Coffee Locks

Your coffee locks as soft as silk, incensed with rich vanilla milk, exotic as southern isles extend for nautical miles against tamarind skin flowing, like radiant sunbeams glowing upon my dreamy fixation, beaconing my exploration. 1-3-2020

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/12/2020 4:58:00 AM

That is so beautiful. Kind wishes, Kai

Juliet Ligon
Date: 2/12/2020 9:01:00 PM

Thanks, Kai.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/5/2020 1:31:00 PM

so pretty and romantic too, Juliet. Great job.

Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/5/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I wrote with a man's voice this time. I love long, flowing hair, but not on men.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/4/2020 7:54:00 PM

this is beautiful Juliet... love the metaphorical language...the soft tones of romance... wonderful entry for the contest... hugs

Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/4/2020 9:29:00 PM

Thank you, dear. Hugs.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/4/2020 11:47:00 AM

Juliet, Your poem rocks in your Lay 'Coffee Locks'. I love that 'flowing tamarind skin'. -Richard

Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/4/2020 5:49:00 PM

Thanks, Richard. I tried tamarind for the first time last year. It was like delicious sour gummies.

Silent One

Date: 1/4/2020 8:57:00 AM

I love it, this is one of the best ive seen for this contest..

Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/4/2020 5:44:00 PM

Aww, thanks, Silent One.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/3/2020 11:35:00 PM

Exotically visual and romantic!

Juliet Ligon
Date: 1/4/2020 12:11:00 AM

Thanks, Evelyn.